Reviews for Rising Dragon
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 6/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 6/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 6/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 6/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 6/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 6/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8
Cliche, cheesy, title not living up to expectations.. , story going at a pace too fast, some grammar mistakes, sloppy ideas made up in a minute ( by that it's just ideas that come from nowhere but a last thought idea of a writer trying to go faster with his writing without thinking at all ) , and finally you have the typical writer attitude of fanfiction writers. Your not a fangirl, yaoi fan, far too dark themed story fan.. But your basically just a writer who writes at a pace that they probably won't understand where their story is gonna go at all.. So I have to give a 2/10 one of my lowest ratings here.. Well lowest rating I've ever given considering I'm looking at both the positives and negatives on this story. This is kinda asking for readers to either see if it's good in the next chapter rather than the first or just nagging readers to leave to find a story without these problems which they always pop up in every story that just looks good.. So that was my review I'm somewhat dissapointed in not finding a good story but... I have a few more pages to look through here..
yuzukikuran476 chapter 6 . 6/14/2014
please update soon :)
yuzukikuran476 chapter 5 . 6/14/2014
well done Hinata iam proud of her and please update soon :)
yuzukikuran476 chapter 4 . 6/14/2014
iam glad that Naruto and Hinata are friends please update soon :)
yuzukikuran476 chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
yep Ino and Sakura must die :)
yuzukikuran476 chapter 2 . 6/14/2014
poor Naruto please update more :(
yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
please update this story and THANK YOU FOR MAKING NARUTO AND HINATA PAIRS and please don't Kill the Third Hokage and Itachi
and I glad Naruto has a brother and i hope Naruto and kyuubi become friends :)
PARKER AR chapter 22 . 6/29/2013
What the hell where is the next chapter!
Wolfone10 chapter 20 . 4/13/2013
I gotta admit, I agree with the fox on some level, how the hell is he supposed to protect ANYONE when you keep having him get his ass handed to him? Or freaking out? I mean COME ON, EVERYONE kicks his ass (well everybody that matters), he's little better than canon, start PULLING OUT THE BIG GUNS for kami's sake! He's got Akautski (sp) to butcher! Snakes to squash! etc, etc,
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