|Reviews for in the palm of me|
| BlueFox of the Moon chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
Wonderful story, you portrayed them both so perfectly! . Amazing job, kudos to you!
| Muffinizer chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
Oh, so touching. -sniffles-
I haven't been on since forever so I was glad I can read fanfiction. [I was like, so sick yesterday that I couldn't even take a step without tripping over air. D:]
Your descriptions, the way you portrayed Gozoru and Lala's love was truly beautiful. -nods- However I think some sentences I got lost in. You may wanna fix those, since they seem like run-on sentences. o.o But maybe that's just me. -
I think that you, Kali, have definitely earned a place in the -Man section where stories are constantly praised. :] Well I hope to see more stories from you. o3o
| Orchid Falls chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
I'm trying to think of words to describe how I'm feeling after reading this, but the only thing I can come up with is a nonsensical, guh. Honestly beautiful. I adore the way you've described their relationship. It's a pairing rarely seen, but I guess the characters fall to the wayside compared with others, nevertheless you have certainly done their story justice.