Reviews for Not Your Average Avatar
ChloeRileyWolfe chapter 4 . 8/13/2012
I loved it!
Pheonix Autumn chapter 4 . 9/29/2010
UP ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! P L Z ! ! ! ! !
Shinigami Ramen chapter 4 . 6/28/2010
Nice story and concept! Only one things could have been better...

LEMON! It was a little mild but ok. Keep writing kaatang!
yourcloudnine chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
WO!

LEMONS!

I LOVE THIS!
Hurricane23 chapter 4 . 8/29/2008
Fantastic! Great story. Is this your first? At first i was taken by surprise by their children from the futer. But it turned out very good. I also liked the crative clothing. Each piece representing one of the elements. Keep on writing.

Hurricane
Derek And Okami chapter 4 . 8/10/2008
Nice story 5/5!
Ichi-chan1 chapter 4 . 7/21/2008
great story lov it
Music and Reading Lover chapter 4 . 6/6/2008
i loved it
Miko in training chapter 4 . 1/17/2008
hahahaha omg thats great great job :) i loved it :)
JenniferJoy26 chapter 4 . 1/9/2008
i love the story. it had a great ending. please write more story like this one.

thanks
1avatarfreak chapter 4 . 8/23/2007
Gets a little confusing in the second page but you wrap it up nicely in the end. Instant fav.
sasuke5010 chapter 4 . 8/6/2007
loved it

but why did they have ten childern

when four might have been better? _
Advanced Faith chapter 4 . 5/13/2007
gr8 story r u ritin a sequel? coz its wick
Second daughter of Eve chapter 4 . 5/8/2007
where do the lemons come in?
Second daughter of Eve chapter 3 . 5/8/2007
you lost me when toph ran away! plz explain.

Eve
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