|Reviews for Golden|
| Fallen and Abused chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
this is awsome!
| SandraNratco chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Wow a Royai fic I like. Great job!
| writerwanabe chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
another great one
| Legendary Chimera chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Yay! Royai! Loved it!
| grilledjellyfish chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
Can't possibly say more... sorry.
| OTP chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
lol that was wonderful nicely done
| The Tiramisu Of Impending Doom chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
This is a pretty sexy story, in my opinion. Okay, let me rephrase. Roy is pretty sexy in this. I really enjoyed the dialogue and the flashbacks. And the part where Roy doesn't want to cry. I like how you've played with their emotions. Makes me think of a longer fic I've been working on. Hurray for angst!
By the way, what the heck does 'slight character death' mean in your summary? Either they die or they don't. And I really hope Riza doesn't die. Because without her, Roy is screwed.
At any rate, this is a beautiful fic. I've found a nice spot for it on my faves list.
| Bizzy chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
Wow, I really really liked that! It was a bit difficult for me to read, but that's becuase the wording got heavy in places. I have a feeling you wanted it that way.
But I liked it. Very in character and very well done. Please keep writing! (I loved the ending, by the way, being the devoted Roiai fan I am.)
| BlackMorale chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
uh... well... it's a little confusing... for me... but it's good though! keep up da good work! XP