Reviews for Four or Five
pokeponda chapter 1 . 7/9/2019
Hmm Ryoma seems to be at a disadvantage with the less than helpful teammates, wonder how he’s going to overcome it, I do like dan, kachiro and Katsuo though. I just don’t like Horio at all, i rather prefer Urayama over him
MidnightAngel1095 chapter 57 . 2/9/2016
This is fun! :D
Heartnett chapter 20 . 7/27/2013
Lol, right before i read the 'dictionary dot com' part, i went on there and searched up 'comedical'... Have no idea why you need to know that, but you do
And, btw, cuz it's obviously less important, THE STORY IS AWESOME! -
wishxfull chapter 57 . 7/18/2013
OHMYGOD. THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. And "total completely out of character characters: 51" xD And Kabaji's hiccuping and sandwiches. I stayed up late to read this and find out who was going to the tennis camp... THE COACHES. Should have expected it. And I literally laughed out loud at David's joke (Jesus saves!) and several other points in the story. Thank you for writing this!
markian chapter 6 . 4/27/2013
It's not mandatory to use the 'desu' after everything Dan says, but it's used as a term of respect in Japan. Just like how Yanagisawa adds that ridiculous noise at the end of everything he says, except that Yanagisawa is just sputtering nonsense...
What a creative place to hide things... I'll have to try it someday :)
Flayne chapter 57 . 12/24/2012
Haha, laughed quite hard at this, loved it! Really good challenges you thought up there!
Kentastic72 chapter 57 . 2/25/2012
This is exactly what I was looking for! A giant, all schools WAR!

Loved the ending. I WASN'T EXPECTING THAT!

This was epic.

Thanks for the story!
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 57 . 7/24/2011
... Wow. Epic.
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 39 . 7/23/2011
Hahaha I liked David's joke! ... that's not a good thing...
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 14 . 7/23/2011
LOL, I'm beginning to see my similarities to David... XD
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 2 . 7/23/2011
Yeah, I wondered how 5 times 8 is 45. But who cares about math... the plot (or lack thereof) is much more important! XD
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Only the first chapter and I'm already tearing up from laughing so much. Hilarious! XD
Hikari-Pandora chapter 50 . 6/24/2011
God, how I love your choice of words! And your tennis matches are just...unique and i think I'm out of words because I want to say a lot am not inspired at the moment. So there you have it, Thanks!

Hikari-Pandora chapter 25 . 6/23/2011
Oh gush, i totally love this and Jirou and how he ends up getting his way. oh and I;m almost willing to bet that these guys will end up making something rather funny than mysterious, but oh well, it's all part of the game.
Hikari-Pandora chapter 24 . 6/23/2011
Feeling fairly amused now.

You do a good job of parodying a lot of things, I just felt like mentioning it since that's one of the things that constantly make me laugh and i seem to have insomnia tonight and... i sometimes start blabbering around uselessly.

Sorry if I'm getting annoying! :p

It really wasn't my intention.


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