Reviews for Prism
Lyneel chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
ah... it was magical.

When it's snowing, I often get this strange, yet enchanting feeling of peace, the movements somehow slowing down and the quiet world letting us contemplate on its beauty. I think that you have captured this admirable atmosphere perfectly. I love the way you write about snow, especially in Luffy's eyes, and about life itself. Idea of "precious moments" was another asset that won my heart. Breathtaking, truly.
Nayeli chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
sweet! 3
1337kitsune chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Aw, I can see the ZoLu if you look and squint a little hehe! Haha, I bet Usopp is still complaining and cooking up stories about how he defeated the giant Snowmonster that had attacked the ship (I'm starting to get in touch with my inner Usopp) Aww, one perfect moment for another eh? Hehe, another good name for this would have been Perfect Moment. But, I'm sure you already though of that Sensei, and chose Prism for your own reasons.
LunaticV chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
perfect moment? hmm, sweet...
Taisi chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Aw...Luffy probably loved the second moment more.
Lotus-chan chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
_ m... this left me with a warm and fuzzy feeling. I thank you.
Qem chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Aw. Sweet.
Ahja Reyn chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
"That's it. Luffy and Zoro were supposed to be a couple already, and have some shower sex after this scene..."

Don't tell us that! (mopes over the lack of smut now)
tenchibaka chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
...i was waiting for deviantart to be done with it's maitanence check so i came here...this little( if i may) drabble is so very wonderful(though the comment on the bottem kinda killed _that_ um, i love it it's so very simple and yet so very detailed it really spoke to me, this was just perfect...though i can't help but cry, why is there no homecoming hill? please update soon, if it's beta problems i can do it in 24 hours tops('sept fri an' sat)...but it was good
Black Angel Winges chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Cool! I hope the next ch. of coral reef will be done soon!
SebDaryus chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
; 3; This fanfic was so... FLUFFY.
blueaorta chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
is nice. made me feel happy and peaceful. i love the ending. luffy is ic but having a quiet moment... it's rare to see a fanfic where he is both luffy and quiet and happy at the same tiem. lovely job. and zolu always

-pyro
renegadewriter8 chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
Yeah it would have ruined it, It's really cute! I swear when Zoro catches a cold I'm gonna laugh real hard! jaja

really cute fic! XD
yo wuz up chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
Wow! tht story was short yet AWESOME

soo cutte! snowmen XDXD
Anchi chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
You have written some cute and somehow angsty fic. I really like it, Luffy in deep thoughts is always unusual but wanted.

I really hate when somebody ruins my perfect moment. They are so unusual and if one of them is ruined..You can't be sure can you get another one.

I have really wanted to read something short written by you. I have wanted to see can you write something really emotional. See can you be sentimental through the fic. And I can see now that you can. Why woudn't you try write something even shorter than this? :P
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