Reviews for Normal Day At Rite Aid
blackdawn112 chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
Update!
arrowheadhunter chapter 2 . 7/9/2009
very good. hilariously ooc. cant wait for the rest!
i-am-psychic-998 chapter 2 . 11/15/2008
ha! this is HILARIOUS. (a little random) but awesome
AceCade chapter 2 . 5/16/2008
so funny and OOC and random lol

loved it

can't wait for Jimena and Collin :D

-AceCade
AceCade chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Poor Serena!

lol. that last line was hysterical!

-AceCade
merrisa stevens chapter 2 . 5/2/2008
write more. it's hilarious!
starbucks-addiction chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
OMGSH! this is SO FUNNY! please update! i wanna see what happens with CATTY! LOL! vanessaXmichael... priceless..priceless...
prettykittydarling chapter 2 . 7/18/2007
hahahahah! that was great! i can't wait for the next ones!
tethe'alla chapter 2 . 5/14/2007
THIS IS AMAZING I TELL YOU AMAZING! keep on keepin on!
ashehole chapter 2 . 4/18/2007
...

This only makes me love Vanessa more, when she's in her "Dominatrix" character. And loving Vanessa can sometimes be hard.

~Batsu-chan
Kiku-chan214 chapter 2 . 4/17/2007
It like a car crash! I just cant look away!

To tell you the truth: The first chapter was reasonable. This chapter was simply ridiculous. I dont see Vanessa acting so phycotic...but then agian, its hilarious!

~~Uru
RealityIsTrippin chapter 2 . 4/17/2007
Hopefully, the pharmicist gets paid enough to tolerate this crap that happens in Rite-Aid... Poor, poor lady...

But, LOL! Vanessa being the "man" in the relationship... Man, that cracked me up! Update please!
ashehole chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
I feel bad for that pharmacist. Man.

Good job!

~Batsu-chan
tethe'alla chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
OH SNAP! serenas going to be tied to a surfboard and left in the middle of the ocean with her unborn child.

my favorite part had to be "It was like an intense Soap Opera…Only without the intensity." lol thats amazing.

MOST IMPORTANTLY: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR ONE (woman/girl) ATTEMPT AT REVIVING THE DOTM SECTION!
nasta dude nl6 chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
this is great so far it has realy good deacription and how do you post a story i got 1 wrote but i don't know how to post it on fan fic can you wrte me back and tell me how plz