|Reviews for What If?|
| Firehedgehog chapter 28 . 3/6
| hellhound-d.o.w chapter 28 . 3/4
Okay, all of those ideas are hilarious, some are twisted as well. If I thought for an instant that I could do any of them justice, I'd ask to adopt them. Here's hoping that you are inspired to continue them into complete stories or that someone that can do them justice will adopt them. Keep up the good work.
| skywiseskychan chapter 28 . 3/4
Ahh, the return of the ever wonderous "Hn." Sasuke you are such a dynamic speaker. I understand why you are stopping here though, I'm not sure there is a longer story to be written.
| Abdullahsaurus chapter 28 . 3/3
Ah man this sounded interesting and funny
| Sasuke chapter 28 . 3/3
| shenmi meiren chapter 28 . 3/2
great idea tho :)
| Weretiger Marduk chapter 28 . 3/2
Good to see more of your work. I can't make heads or tails of the yahoo group.
| mrpietan chapter 28 . 3/2
that is one interest disclaimer. and i haven't even read the chapter yet
| CMVreud chapter 28 . 3/2
Sorry to rain your parade, but there already is a story with Sasukes nindo-no-"Hn".
| ruby2360 chapter 28 . 3/2
It was really good chapter, I would love to read full story of that...
| NarutosBrat chapter 28 . 3/1
Too bad, it was really getting good.
| xelsan chapter 28 . 3/1
Oh come on! You have to write more of this! It's brilliant and a wonderful, crazy, enjoyable read! It's just as good as your Dungeons and Drow Arc and the one that has Lily come back as a crazy scientist, I'm actually ashamed I can't recall the name for that one and I'll promptly be off to read both those stories again, for your Harry Potter Odd Idea's Bin! I'm sure a lot of work would have to go into them to really make them full stories but the potential they all have is nigh boundless! If some one from FF or your Yahoo group ever decide to take a crack at them, though I'm iffy on that prospect because they would like your touch and flair, I hope that you post a notice for it. Keep up the, as always, amazing work!
| Sony Boy chapter 28 . 3/1
Okay, Sasuke's 'hn' is annoying but funny. I"d never be able to go along with it in a longer fic unless he's mute or deaf.
I rather like that the Hokage knows what the kids did and is keeping an eye. But also letting them do it on their own and see what they do. Subtle help and mentoring too. I like it very much.
| anon chapter 27 . 3/1
Lol this looked like it could've been a pretty entertaining story, too bad you got tired of the idea. Hope somebody eventually does write it, but I also hope they do it at least half as well as you did, otherwise it may not read nearly as well.
| Professor chapter 28 . 3/1
1. You have a very strange mind and I wish to see more of it.