|Reviews for What If?|
| a fan of this chapter 3 . 11/28
we need more mistress hinata
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/21
MR. Orange has so much potential to be a separate story... :D
| Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 14 . 8/19
Best chapter ever, I really wish this was a whole novel.
| Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 3 . 8/18
I would love to see a continuation of that Omake. xD
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/15
MR. ORANGE !
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/25
Wtf is this stupid random bullshit
| HalfBlood Prince chapter 20 . 7/20
PLEASE! THIS STORY IS SO HYLARIOUS, JUST LIKE OTHER STORY "MAKE A WISH" THIS DESERVES A SEQUEL... :D
| Lord Touch Me chapter 27 . 7/19
This story reminds me of the other story "make a wish", so it would be much better rewrite evething to repeate how many Favs and Follows recived... :D
| Lord Touch Me chapter 27 . 7/14
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/5
Hn. Dattebayo! Hn! Dattebayo? Sasuke-kun! Hn...
I always pictured a Potter version where Hermione just hisses "Booooks!"
| Kyle prince chapter 4 . 4/2
wtf is this chaos
| Ryan chapter 36 . 3/17
I laughed out loud more than once, this is good!
| Alohomora chapter 6 . 3/4
"I can do a hundred push ups with my tongue. Anyone wanna see? The girls will flock to you like Naruto to ramen." Oh my God, I laughed out loud while reading that part. Haha, yeah that's a nice pick up line I'd love to hear in real life.
| Alohomora chapter 3 . 3/4
The gag refelx and flexibility killed me. Good job author.
| RwbyRose03244 chapter 24 . 2/12
Your brother is a pussy I love it lol