Reviews for Lost Brother
Guest chapter 8 . 2/19
He would have been more luck with Tony as O'Neill's secret child.
Archangelrose chapter 18 . 6/14/2019
Dude you gotta complete this story it's awesome and I would love to see how it goes forward from this.
Arekanderu chapter 18 . 7/23/2018
This is really cool
Frozen in Idaho chapter 18 . 7/5/2017
Love your story sad to see you appeared to have dropped it.
geekymom chapter 18 . 2/17/2017
Please finish the story! It's so cute!
katie.nolan.3720 chapter 18 . 12/19/2014
It would be nice if this story was finished, that's all I got to say.
katie.nolan.3720 chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
I like your plot and consept.
eilidhdawn chapter 18 . 11/25/2014
Really good story
Better if finished
LPeck chapter 18 . 10/12/2013
Lovin' little Jack! He is too cute! :-)
simys chapter 18 . 7/7/2012
I really love this story and wish that you would continu it
Jackless chapter 18 . 1/29/2012
Hey, just found this wonderful story. Did you ever finish it? If so, please share the link, if not PLEASE DO! This is great and I'd love to read the ending. Please let me know. Thanks Angela
Degizzie chapter 10 . 7/9/2011
Allright, I'm not even halfway through this chapter and I just have to send a review. At the beginning of chapter 9 you say that is has been looked over for grammar by transgenic-girl. No offence to her, but she didn't do a very good job back then. It's still full of grammar and spelling mistakes and chapter ten is no better. It's seriously starting to annoy me. Now, English isn't my motherlanguage too so I understand. I bet I made a few mistakes in this review. I'm still doubting if 'of' should be with one 'f' or two. Anyway, I shall continue reading since it's still a good story and I wanna know the rest.
maya chapter 18 . 7/6/2011
cute and interesting
Terry Kay chapter 18 . 4/21/2011
REally great so far (especially w/beta)! Really wish you'd finish it. Please?
Madances chapter 18 . 4/19/2011
Hi, I know that it has been a long time, but have you considered finishing 'Lost Brother'? I would really be glad if you do. Great Job,so far. Tracy
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