Reviews for Even Perverts Deserve a Second Chance
Steavatron chapter 1 . 7/1
I like the concept, I like the chapter and the flow so far, but I totally think you could've done without the whole Itachi-Kisame thing. Didn't really need to be done in my opinion, but hey, to each his own right?
The Good Child chapter 3 . 1/26
this is the first and only story I have read of Jiraiya goin back in time. I love it but wish there were more to the story.
Darknessfairy3564 chapter 3 . 11/9/2015
This is really good so far I cant wait to read more
Guest chapter 3 . 9/5/2015
FUCKING UPDATE U DEAD BITCH OMG THIS IS GR8 I LOVE TH I S
Guest chapter 3 . 2/24/2015
GO PERVERT hahahahhaha keep going:-)
Loner Kid chapter 3 . 1/19/2015
I apologize for not reviewing any of your previous chapters. The reason was that I downloaded this fic so I can read it without wi-fi access. Anyhow, I really REALLY like this story. It's probably the only story that deals with Jiraiya's going back and changing his past. Jiraiya's reactions were believable. Even though he's an old man, he still would reacted strongly to see his family and enemies... I can't to read more. Are you still going to update?
Cherry chapter 3 . 12/22/2014
I cry every time I read this story! I's so sad!
JJS chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
do do realize gamkichi would not have been born yet…..
Sheaman chapter 3 . 4/28/2014
This looked like a really interesting story, though it seemed like you were playing up the Team 7 analogue too strongly. Still, I'm sorry to see that you decided not to continue it.

I guess I'll just check out your other stories...
Blackbird0 chapter 3 . 4/8/2014
This is really good! Please don't abandon this story, it has so much potential:)
shadowmarialove chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
I really love this!
flaming rose chapter 3 . 5/16/2013
What?! No more chappies?! Please write again soon! I. Need. To. Read. More! Please!
AirbourneEnginuity chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Hehehe... it really IS team seven all over again...
Guest chapter 3 . 10/29/2012
wish you continued this one...
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
~ Orochimaru… and Broadway… he snorted, smirking.

[Pondering] Orochimaru is snake villain, like Voldemort, right, arrogant and seeking immortality? And since there are many fictions where Tom Marvolo Riddle turns out to be brilliant, charming, genius (maybe, slightly insane, and researching forbidden arts, but hiding all of this well enough that nobody even thinks to suspect him) who attacks only to protect himself or his family, not out of greed... Is there any fiction where Orochimaru is cold, charming, brilliant genius, who has a lot of influence, but doesn't use his darker sides until necessary (to protect himself, his family, his village)... Is there any fiction where Orochimaru is better Hokage than Danzo could ever be? Butterfly effect... The edge between genius, like young Orochimaru was, and homicidal maniac, like old Orochimaru became, is difficult to define. Is it possible to have Orochimaru brilliant, subtle, genius, instead of homicidal, maniac, power-hungry? Is it possible to have Orochimaru time-travelling due to regret during his death, regretting the war, regretting the loneliness?

Good luck. Couldn't Jiraiya get 'simple' time-travel, where in his young body young and old personalities slowly blend, and different sets of memories, somewhat conflicting, slowly settle, causing a migraine-headache, strong enough to be a believable excuse to not be with team today, and also allowing Jiraiya to give 'young reactions' when needed, and temporarily ignore memories about his team-mate Orochimaru becoming a villain, temporarily ignore his old memories in order for his behaviour to remain unsuspicious...
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