|Reviews for Just Breathe|
| freshbit chapter 14 . 3/28/2011
I know this is really really late to review, but I found the story so amazing that I couldn't resist. Actually I read your Criminal Minds stories first(your post-Lauren story is Amazing! Others too) , then one thing led to another, I found out you wrote Standoff stories too, which is one of my favorite series. I think you really captured all the characther well! I wish I had discovered your stories sooner, but it feels like I got a unexpected gift now :D I'm going through all your stories. Keep up the good work, please!
| zurrikan chapter 14 . 8/3/2007
This is a really touching story. I like the way that you spliced the timelines. I almost cried when Emily was in the hospital with Matt. Very emotional and provoking. Hope to read more great stories, even though I don't think that the series got picked up for a second season.
| thewomanwhosoldtheworld chapter 14 . 7/26/2007
fantastic ending! just the right amount of matt/em to make it believable! loved the bit about 'jaws'lol.
| hunnielove chapter 14 . 7/25/2007
You ended it beautifully! I really can't wait for you to start more stories, I sure hope this isn't the last.
| mariedawn2 chapter 14 . 7/25/2007
As glad as I was to see what the conclusion of the story was I'm very sad thats it over! It was a great story! I loved seeing how they got through a tough experience to come out still strong and together! I hope you have more story ideas for us to read!
| squinter chapter 13 . 7/25/2007
YAY he's awake! Awesome chapter! I love how you worked in the title. So have you read the new HP book yet? It was my favorite thus far. Happy reading,
| thewomanwhosoldtheworld chapter 13 . 7/23/2007
great chapter, although i love romantic fics please try and not make it to sappy, it would ruin a perfectly good fic if you end with a sappy chappy. maybe something like they lying in bed, as they always are on the show when they are alone.
or something like that, i don't know but it's been a brillant story so far.
| Rese1986 chapter 13 . 7/21/2007
gah! matts awake. yeah! i didn't know what would happen. if he'd make it or not. but i'm so glad he did. *big grin*
| hunnielove chapter 13 . 7/21/2007
Yay everything worked out! Can't wait to see how you wrap it all up : )
| mariedawn2 chapter 13 . 7/21/2007
He's awake! He's awake! That was so good! That judge is pretty much the best judge ever! I loved all the thoughts running through Matt's head when he woke up and how Emily completely broke down when she found out he was awake!
| hunnielove chapter 12 . 7/20/2007
can't wait for an update! I know everything will work out.
| thewomanwhosoldtheworld chapter 12 . 7/18/2007
great so far, if you do deicide to wake matt up, try not to make it to sappy, i love m/e fics but i hate the sappy over done ones. so far it has been really good though, thanks...
| folgersgirl chapter 12 . 7/18/2007
You're not the only one with a computer fiasco...
Great chapter! Matt wake up!
| mariedawn2 chapter 12 . 7/16/2007
Great Chapter! I really like the judge on the case! He seems like a nice guy! HA, the idea of Emily giving a puppy to Cheryl is funny, I would love to see that! So what's Emily's decision going to be, don't leave me hanging to long!
| Rese1986 chapter 12 . 7/16/2007
another great chapter of course! i almost don't want to read anymore till its finished lol this suspense is killing me! but i'm impatient and can't wait for that lol so i'll have to keep suffering. knowing that i will soon be rewarded with a new chapter!