|Reviews for A Second Chance|
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/29
Beautiful write, so moving and emotional and AWESOME!
| One Lonely Marauder chapter 6 . 10/8/2013
...Aww, I got goosebumps after that. What an amazing story. I love Gabby fics, but this one just takes the cake. ...Awww! *squeals again*
Thank you for writing this, it's amazing and beautiful!
| stareagle chapter 6 . 8/2/2012
I liked this. Thanks for posting. I liked Emma
| s m Neal chapter 6 . 1/9/2012
well done my dear
| Gibbsredhoodie chapter 6 . 12/28/2011
What a lovely story, and who doesn't love a sappy ending ;-) I think you stayed true to the characters too. Nice job!
| bananas365 chapter 6 . 4/13/2011
This was a beautiful story. You are a wonderfully talented writer.
| ArgentAzure chapter 6 . 6/4/2010
I like the way you're careful to keep Gibbs and Abby in character throughout the story, even when the helplessness and guilt and angst of both the characters are at their peaks. I like, too, the way you portray their relationship: careful and slow, not because of fragility but because they are different from and strange to each other. And neither of them seem to see it as something illicit or threatening to the professional equilibrium to which they are both so devoted.
I don't think the end is too sappy, actually. I cringed when the elderly lady came onto the scene, thinking that she would be one of those wise NPC's who turn and shout "The Theme, the THEME!" at the reader, but in fact she turns out to be one of the best parts of the story. The conversation Gibbs has with her is without platitudes or easy answers, and the events that occur afterwards-his reading her obituary in the newspaper, her leaving him an umbrella-are realistic. She doesn't turn out to be the owner of the hospital or the mother of Javier Ramirez or Abby's grandmother telling Gibbs to go for it or something nauseatingly neat and unlikely. Instead the extraordinariness she makes in the story is just that of human interaction. Which is kind of the point of the fic as a whole.
So, yeah, nicely done. I enjoyed it, and I think it's pretty well written. Thanks for sharing it with the world.
| bobbybobboo chapter 6 . 5/10/2010
THAT WA AWSOME GR8 JOB
| tasha rumgay chapter 6 . 4/18/2010
hi honey i loved the story it was so sweet . i'm not such a big fan of the episodesof hiatus but you do get to see what kind of stste gibbs was in when hearing about the death of his wife and daughter and mike franks having tio tell him that the guy got away and gibbs finding him and killing. it proves the t gibbs does have a past and you arenot quite sure what he is capeable of if some one he loves is hurt or killed case in point Ari killing Kate
| Roxie-Lee chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Chapter one is great...Started the dramatics from the first sentence. I am now headed on to chapter 2. Keep up the great writing.
| Fed up with this crap chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Poor Abby and I doubt/Hope Abby doesn't die. Gibbs would be so sad.
| limnamae chapter 6 . 5/30/2009
Ohh... So sweet. Thank you for giving me this very good and sweet story. Just what I needed in this cold and dark time. Love Freja
| Anne Russell chapter 6 . 5/28/2009
I really liked this story. I liked the way that the characters progressed. Keep writing more!
| Soladara chapter 6 . 3/29/2009
Aw, this was very cute. Thank you for sharing it with us. I think your characterizations were spot on, and I loved Abby's parents. I wonder how her dad feels about the new relationship. Kudos to you for a great story.
| DoomBunny Gallery chapter 6 . 11/16/2008
OMG i totally love this story!
you can really write great!
P.s if my english isn't right excuse me then cause i'm not english