Reviews for Coldblooded Vengeance
crokettsgirl chapter 20 . 9/10/2010
I'm glad that Doug was able to calm Tom down. But Doug is right Tom probably said enough to make them sedate Doug so that Tom could take off. And this nurse called Sandy I hope she isn't the same but then Tom would have noticed and so would she. And now that Doug is sleeping Tom is off to do God knows what. Again I love how you have the characters and how you're writing this story. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 19 . 9/10/2010
hmmmm, I wonder who set the bomb. I wonder if it were Bruno and Bruno burned those kids and is playing with Mandy and Calvin along with Sandra. Just a guess. again I loved the banter between Tom and Doug with the kitten and tiger etc. Now they have to stop with that bomb and get help for Doug while Harry is still out there...Nicely done. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 18 . 9/10/2010
Go Penhall! I'm glad he got the paper and beat Bruno up a bit...and agian love the banter between Hanson and Penhall and how Penhall beat up Bruno cause he called Tom a just love it. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 17 . 9/10/2010
I just love how you have them banter like the show it's great! Poor Tom having to kiss and sweet talk Bruno for the info. I just hope that Bruno lets Doug go with them. And that they can do what Doug said and ditch Bruno once they find Calvin. I wonder if the guy knows where he is or is just going to that old house. And I'm wondering about Mandy cause when she sees Ioki she will know he isn't Hanson and I wonder what she'll do then. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 16 . 9/10/2010
Oh Judy foiled Hanson's plan to get Doug Doug locked up in the stall and Judy laughing so just loved it. I'm glad he told Judy and she did keep it as promised until Doug told her. Now they have a compromise to sit in the corner I hope nothing goes wrong how is Hanson going to fight this guy off without blowing his cover. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 15 . 9/10/2010
Oh this was funny. I love how Tom is used to this yet doesn't like it and Doug has never dressed like a woman for a undercover op. And Bruno zeroing in on Hanson with Doug laughing was funny but I had to really laugh as a typical Hanson got Doug back in a big way. Can't wait to read Doug's are doing so great on their characters and especially with the Hanson 1 and Penhall 0 Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 14 . 9/10/2010
I agree with Penhall I can't see him dressed as a girl. Hanson we saw that and he did well with Fuller knows about them and he is half cool about it and I'd say half not knowing what to think about the banter, I always love how Penhall can banter and then banter between him and Hanson is the't wait to read about them seducing the
crokettsgirl chapter 13 . 9/10/2010
oh no they took the wrong one. Well at least Fuller is in TN with their police department. And Doug and Tom got their feelings out in the open, Judy will be wonder what they're doing for 19 minutes...Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 12 . 9/10/2010
great break they got with the RV and the people using their real names. Judy and Doug are right these people don't know how to do this so they must not have ever done something like this before. I hope Doug can find them and Fuller can get with the cops down there cause Fuller and the rest are out of their territory. They'd need to have the police department there to say it's alright and work with them. I just hope that Fuller , Judy and Doug find them and find out what's going on. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 11 . 9/10/2010
I'm glad they got to talk to Mackie and find out what's going on. But Ioki hit it right with the Mandy thing. Poor Hanson once again he dates a girl and now all hell breaks loose after a period of time. Can't wait to see what happens. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 10 . 9/10/2010
Well at least they know where they are and what their next plan is. I'm surprised Fuller hasn't called around or had them go right to the police department since Fuller and them don't know what part of TN they're in. I'm so glad Judy over heard what Penhall said about Hanson. That she was able to tell Doug that Tom did say something to her and that it meant something. Now she knows more that Tom and has Doug to press Tom into telling him. loveing the story . Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 9 . 9/10/2010
This does seem strange, seems the woman wants this more than the guy and I wonder if this is not the guy that went after Hanson and killed that girl. And if that guy killed their daughter and since the four from Jump street were there if these people are trying to get this guy or are being threatened by him or something. Now you got me wondering with it great in the writing world. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 8 . 9/10/2010
Great they split them all up. Good thing Doug is a big boy and could use it to pull the chair apart. Glad that they are alright and the jump didn't hurt them too bad. Now they have to run. I hope they get away and then find out where Tom and Harry are. Can't wait to see what these people want with them all. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 7 . 9/10/2010
oh boy they do get themselves into things...Judy teasing Hanson yet doing it so he'd come clean with Doug was so good. And then Doug hearing something about him and putting Tom in a tight spot was so good. Now this woman and guy find them, is this guy looking for them because they saw him with the girl? And now all but Ioki are tranquilized but he probably got it too...Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 6 . 9/10/2010
I love how you show the honest feelings yet have comic relief in there to relieve the tension. Tom was starting to get into it but would he? Now Doug knows about the conversation and will push him knowing something is wrong. Love that pans and pants thing...and Tom smelling the waffles all the way where they were parked. Nicely done. Sue
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