Reviews for The Dark Dance of Temptation chapter 11 . 12/27/2021
Everything is so much more dramatic from Edward's pov. Its like he's on the verge of killing her everything he sees her. Its different from Meyer's books, where he had a good hold on his bloodlust post New Moon after he thought Bella died. This is a whole lot scarier. chapter 10 . 12/26/2021
The confrontation with Jacob sounds fun. I definitely need to switch over to the Bella pov to check that out. I'm starting to think a lot of the cooler stuff is happening on Bellas side.

I'm curious about the confrontation with Esme and Jacob. I've always thought of Esme as the weakest vamp while Jacob is the strongest wolf. How that plays out should be interesting.

On the flip side, because Edward is a mind reader we're getting a lot more out if scenes like the one with Renee. chapter 9 . 12/26/2021
Its interesting reading this story and the Bella pov story at the same time, seeing things from different sides.

The tutorial Carlisle gave was interesting. Turning someone really is more complex than just biting them. Its nice that Edward has the support system he does. chapter 8 . 12/24/2021
Its lame how Alice was wondering why Jacob found her and they didn't. The obvious answer is Jacob was actually guarding her while the Cullens left her completely along to go home ho e and play chess. Though there's obviously more going on here, the bottom line is the Cullens left Bella alone and unguarded, so they shouldn't really need to wonder why someone got to her. They are acting like morons in this story. chapter 7 . 12/24/2021
Its lucky that Jacob was there for Bella, considering the Cullens left her completely unguarded. I don't understand why they kept doing that in the story m. Its frankly dumb luck Victoria didn't kill her. In this story at least, the Cukkens were miserable failures in protecting Bella. Jacob had to step up and take up the skack for Edward's incompetence. That's kinda sad. chapter 6 . 12/24/2021
It'll be interesting to see how they handle Bella leaving. I assume I'll just be her going to college in Alaska, though faking her death has to be done sooner or later chapter 5 . 12/24/2021
Was Jacob planning on kidnapping Bella? That's just messed up. At least Sam has the good sense to avoid starta war. chapter 4 . 12/24/2021
I always love sex talks between Carlisle and Edward in fanfics, because we never got them in Meyers books since they were from Bellas lov. They're always awkward and fun.

The energy sharing thing with vamps is kinda interesting. A bit surprising Edward is only learning about that now. chapter 3 . 12/24/2021
If the while lightning thing is a potential danger to Bella when they are together.

I find it interesting that the wolves and Cullens don't have at least 1 person watching Bella at all times. There seem to be small windows where she was left completely unguarded and Victoria might have had a shot. chapter 2 . 12/23/2021
Gow, Edward was that close to attacking Bella and murdering her father? Just because they could only be together for a limited amount of time?

I almost hate to say it, but I sort of see where Jacob is coming from. In this story at least Edward does endanger her. He seems in much more control in Meyers books. Here it's kinda scary. chapter 1 . 12/23/2021
I give Charlie some props for talking to Edward reasonably, but removing the door and locking the window is a bit over the top (and probably a fire code violation).

Given Bella is 18 and can technically leave anytime he wants, he can't push this too far. Hopefully he mellows.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/5/2020
I don't get it. Bella is being punished for being suicidal? She's 18. I get that she wants to spend time with her father before she's gone for good, but restrictions aren't quality time. Especially when's she's old enough to not have to tolerate it. She really needs to grow a pair and tell him no. He needs to learn that she's an adult and it's past time he treated her that way. If She needs to leave than leave but quit letting him treat her like she's a young child a young child he didn't raise.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2020
So Jacob was successful. He is keeping them apart.
SweetlyVanilla chapter 4 . 4/28/2020
"HmMm, BeLlA flAvOrEd."
Sorry, that cracked me up! 0
campyrsm chapter 24 . 6/13/2019
I loved every chapter! Thank you!
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