|Reviews for The Dark Dance of Temptation|
| mystylady chapter 24 . 9/11/2012
I'm not sure if the story ends here orr not but Bella's story did not end this way and if FanFiction is erasing all M stories that are more erotic then where are the writers
going is there another web site and if so could you please let me know thank you.
You are a good writer and should continue writing but don't let fanfiction stop you from writing what you want, people will follow you wherever web site you write you stories on.
| babesbraves chapter 23 . 9/1/2012
wow that was fantastic! it was a little bit dark at the start but it filled out and made your story much more and a better one for it! thankyou for sharing your work it is unbelivable keep it up!
| Edward'sDJ chapter 5 . 7/21/2012
Edward is not careful enough not to reawaken Bella's insecurities.
| Edward'sDJ chapter 4 . 7/21/2012
Carlisle is lovely.
| Edward'sDJ chapter 3 . 7/21/2012
Lovely. Even Rosalie agrees.
| Edward'sDJ chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/2/2012
yes yes yes.
| MaryMary123 chapter 15 . 7/1/2012
shower time for the readers.
| MaryMary123 chapter 13 . 7/1/2012
Bella needs to stand up and nail Black once and for all. Tell him she hates him.
| MaryMary123 chapter 12 . 7/1/2012
I am sorry I have not reviewed. I have been reading and being interrupted by RL in my house! Good story. Jacob Black worries me. He is so volatile.
| MaryMary123 chapter 6 . 7/1/2012
that was so sweet.
| InkedBaby chapter 24 . 6/11/2012
The site won't let me log in):
I love love love this. I honestly spent every second of my spare time for the last four days reading this. So worth it. This is so in character, and I love all the little details and just everything. Everything, I loved everything.
| aussietwilight chapter 24 . 6/9/2012
Put it on TWCS :)
| InkedBaby chapter 6 . 6/9/2012
I can seriously just picture him hugging her against his car laughing into her shoulder. Seriously? So adorable.
| Saydonee chapter 23 . 1/29/2012
great end :)