Here’s what I think - I believe that Knight is the serial killer.

Excellent story, I’m thoroughly enjoying this, Kudos

The plot is brilliant, I'm not suggesting otherwise, but it's so bloody frustrating to see Harry trust literally anything and anyone beside Snape, why can't he just talk to the man or even Dumbledore about this situation? First Moody(of all people) suspects Snape is doing some shady things, he believed Moody in a heartbeat and burgled Snape's bedroom and office, now this Auror-on-leave Defence teacher (ya, good track record btw) who he barely knew tells him she is following Snape and is taking over his investigation, then he believed her and told her he saw Snape out of the castle before. Like wtf? After all that they've been through? This honestly feels like one of those romance novel misunderstanding trope, and it's really getting on my nerve.

This has become one of my absolute favorites. One of the best hp fanfiction I have ever read. Loved the complexity of Snape's character. He's my favorite fictional character, and you increased my appreciation and love for said character. Kudos!

Holy shit this fic was amazing. I thought Snape died at chapter 29 it think it was

This is one of the best stories out there, and the relationship between Harry and Snape is so good it’s difficult to stop reading. in saying that Harry comes out as rather dim witted, selfish and irresponsible. True, the cannon shows his character as immature and naive but not quite to this extent, he seems to fall in the same mistake over and over again, which makes it rather of putting.

I just finished reading this story (in Hungarian language- a good translation if I may add, not everyone can write well when translating given the defferences in grammar and many hardships while translating but this was a good work there)
Back to your exceptional work... Yes, exceptional because I find this one pretty unique in the best way. I mean, I mostly read severitus fanfictions but never met a story where in their relationship there is such a dynamic. The way they interact is so unique an so much reflects them. And also they personality and the depths of their souls... Congratulations for a very well written story. I wanted to say that I especially liked the complex personality of Severus but I realized that I like the personality you gave to Harry too... and also Remus... and the deep understanding personality of Ginny and the type of relationship she has with Harry (I mean there are hundreds of stories with them together but not many has that basic understanding and support that Ginny gives here).
I also like the way this story is different from canon, the logic behind the storyline. Again congrats you are a really good writer!

Mea

I just finished reading this story (in Hungarian language- a good translation if I may add, not everyone can write well when translating given the defferences in grammar and many hardships while translating but this was a good work there)
Back to your exceptional work... Yes, exceptional because I find this one pretty unique in the best way. I mean, I mostly read severitus fanfictions but never met a story where in their relationship there is such a dynamic. The way they interact is so unique an so much reflects them. And also they personality and the depths of their souls... Congratulations for a very well written story. I wanted to say that I especially liked the complex personality of Severus but I realized that I like the personality you gave to Harry too... and also Remus... and the deep understanding personality of Ginny and the type of relationship she has with Harry (I mean there are hundreds of stories with them together but not many has that basic understanding and support that Ginny gives here).
I also like the way this story is different from canon, the logic behind the storyline. Again congrats you are a really good writer!

Mea

This was amazing. Thank you.

Great story. Really touching. Thanks for sharing!

It’s so difficult to compose myself after finishing the story and to form my emotions into proper words, but I’ll still try! I’ve found this work thanks to one person’s recommendation on the other website and I’m so glad I gave it a try. I’ve been reading both parts of your series for a whole week and I hardly could think of anything else before finishing it today. You have an amazing way with words, every chapter had my full attention from the very beginning thanks to an intriguing plot. I’d also like to mention that your original characters like Ryan and Knight were a really great addition to the story!

Your series feel entirely like a canon continuation to the OotP, I feel like if I reread hp books in future, I could just switch to your 2 books instead of JK’s ones, as I find your storyline more satisfying. All of your characters portrayals felt very in canon and of course I can’t not mention that your writing of Harry and Snape’s personalities was incredible! Their relationship was the most natural and realistic I’ve ever seen portrayed in a fan work and I’ve seen many of them.

It was such a pleasure to read your stories, thank you so much for all effort and time you put into writing and publishing it! I’d gladly read anything else from you on any other fandom or original works, as I find your writing style so enjoying to read.

Thank you! This really was one of my favorite fanfics, I’m glad I found it!

Are you going to involve Horcruxes in this story?

Why is Moody actin like this? He’d be happy that all these Death Eaters are dying. You’re making Moody OOC.

I’ve been reading Enemy Within and Chained Souls over the last few weeks and am so sad to have finished this amazing series. This is by far the most well written and in character fanfic I’ve ever read, with plenty of action and emotion that makes this feel like a real installment of Harry Potter. I love mentor fics, but Snape is often OOC, but your version of him is accurate to the series while giving him plenty of more depth and connection to Harry. I loved their rapport throughout this and I can’t express how freaking happy I was when you didn’t kill Snape off in the end lol… but seriously, you’re awesome and thanks for an amazing reading experience! Hope you’re still doing well today

Nice wrap.
I liked your use of a version of the Committee of Public Safety. I wonder if you read Scarlet Pimpernel stories?
Probably one of the masterly portrayals of Severus Snape in fandom.