Reviews for Our story
LovelyDayna chapter 4 . 12/26/2009
Ok this is good, so continue please! update soon.
Crazy Girl Writer chapter 4 . 10/1/2009
i liked the story but i feel like there are gaps like it combined with assassin are just half the story. I would love if you wrote how lois and chloe found out it was the three superheroes, how they punished lana, how they came to work with lex and lionel and how chloe became the assassin. Thanks
RedMagic chapter 4 . 7/10/2007
So why did Lana do it? I'm trying to figure that out. Cant wait to read more though.
Kit Merlot chapter 4 . 5/17/2007
This is a great story, but I have a bunch of questions. Why did Lana arrange Gabe's death? And in the first chapter, Lionel died saving Chloe, and who was responsible for Lionel's death? Is Lana linked to both of their deaths?

I do like Lois and Chloe's partnership in making Lana suffer, which I'm always behind :):)

More soon.
Kit Merlot chapter 2 . 4/27/2007
This is an interesting beginning-please continue!

And I think you should post your Chlex stories at the greratest Chlex site ever-Naughty Seductions. If you want, I can send you the link to the site-let me know:)
Zucht chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
I found the story A little confusing, but more chapters would undoubtedly clear everything up.
jwstahle chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
horrible
edora chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
I see you decided to give us the whole story now ;)

Interesting beginning, let's see what the flashback shows us.