Reviews for Cast between Worlds |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 10 year aniversary |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I looked at the update date and I'm quite sad looks like this story is completely dead hasn't been updated in over a decade very sad so much potential the story was very good I would have been very interested to see what would have happened next |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really know, how this site works yet, just wanted to say, this is my favourite HP crossover as of date. I already read all the chapters, and definitely bookmarked among those stories, I will reread. Probably more than once. Harry as airforce is very fitting. Also John and Harry are so sweet together, wanna hug them. :D Hope to find some more of its kind, somehow I always found some quite rare ships that I longing for. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for a great read so far. Sure hope you find your way back to this at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it, please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. I hope the author can get back to completing it. Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you forgot that you killed Grodin earlier |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it's been years and I don't even know if you are still active on this website but let me say this was amazing to read! I don't a single thing about US military but it was so great how you detailed everything. I really love your Harry and his relationship with Sheppard (I was reading the previous comments and woah, didn't know there were that much homophobes back then lol). It was fascinating to read, really! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your story would be so much better if you put an hour into military regulation and protocols, and understand that they would not send a cadet... correction a STUDENT into a combat situation. So this is painful to read as well as an incredibly inaccurate portrayal of any of the armed forces, and since you said he was part of the AIRFORCE he would not even be recommended for combat OP, and while yes StarGate portrays an Airforce major on the ground fighting, you also need to understand that is a fantasy world, and they are also in another universe with limited manpower and resources, so in those circumstances, yes I could see it happening, as they would need every available combat personnel to have a gun (also wasn't Shepard only on that mission because he was like one of the Ancients or something, it has been a while since I watched the show so I am forgetting why he was even on the mission in the first place, but it was defiantly not to be on the ground shooting a gun in the first place) |
![]() ![]() ![]() before Harry left the Wizarding World, I hope you got everything but he hadn't Gringotts, as well as getting Dobby to come with him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 0 Kelvin is unreachable. The temperature in the space is actually about 10K |
![]() ![]() ![]() seriously learn some physics there is so much wrong with this it would take an epic lecture on even basic things to explain |