I’m amazed by your writing and the way your story left such a powerful impression on me. I believe it has the potential to shine as a comic, and I’d love to discuss that with you. As a commission-based digital artist with a background in comic collaborations, I’d be excited to work with you.
Let’s connect on Discord: lishafang or Twitter: Pelu_Oficial123.

Hello! I wanted to take a moment to say how much I admire your incredible writing talent. Your story left a lasting impression on me, and I’d love the opportunity to discuss it further.

As a commission-based digital artist, I specialize in collaborating with authors to bring their stories to life through engaging comic art. I believe your work has immense potential in this medium, and I’d be thrilled to explore the possibility of turning your story into a visual masterpiece.

If this idea sparks your interest, you can reach me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( mariegrey90). I’d love to discuss how we can bring your vision to life!

Now that was a fun read! I had a great time with this crossover - and I KNEW there was something sus about Sara in the lab! Hah! It feels so good to be right ;)
Thank you so much for writing this and kudos to you! 333

I want to thank you for this ride!
absolutely mind-blowing
amazing
had me on my seat from the very first chapter until the last
that's 14 hours binging, through the night
it also worked as I needed to reset my circadium rythum as well
so thank you for writing something that entertained me enough to make me forget the urge to sleep.
and i don't know what to say about the story itself:
very well written
the pacing is just right to not overwhelm me nor bore me
the plot well thought out and very rewarding to complete
the characters were so in-character I could hear their voices in my head and
I likely will not remember it as fan fic and more likely to mistake it as one hell of a tv show binged
By the look of it started in 2007 and completed in 2014, that could not have been easy
Thank you for actually sticking to it and finishing it, rather than dropping it - which I would have definitely done, as i do not have the willpower and self discipline needed to do that
for that also Kudo's
when I remember something else to add, I'll jump back a chapter and add it

for now
hope this review reaches you in good health
wish you a nice day, week, month, year and life ahead of you
best regards
Anikixvi

Pretty good MacGyver babble in this chapter 15.

NO GOD DAMN IT ASHLEYYY
i have not consumed either piece of media in this crossover but this thing has made me feel Emotions, well done ficwriterman

So the military trained kid with an arm made of metal can't even break a nose? I mean it's like getting beaten in the face with a brick. And what's up with his demure response, and moment of vulnerability? Don't change his behaviour to make him go along with the plot. The fact that an alchemist got caught so quickly is already a bit bad, what with him being capable of creating walls and all, moreover he was in a situation where he was being followed by people with guns without really knowing their intention, possibly capture to later torture... and what does he do? Not even attack back without alchemy.

I reread this instead of sleeping.

Hell of a great story really enjoyable read, Thank you

I appreciate the amount of effort put into repeatedly injuring Ed to make him losing to this guy more realistic but even so it wasn't nearly enough. Maybe if the guy had shot him or set another death trap or something it would be believable but a random psycho taking him down in melee fighting with no understanding or knowledge of his powers just doesn't track. Especially when it happens twice in a row. If he was injured enough for something like that to be believable I don't really think he'd have made it to the meeting place without keeling over. Any concern I have for the characters is completely overshadowed by the annoyance of some loser with a bat taking down an anime protagonist because his injuries conveniently acted up at just the wrong moment. Though like I said, I appreciate that there was at least an attempt to justify it. Some stories would just use the character being caught off guard as an excuse for them to lost to someone nowhere close to their league.

Good story but the ridiculously overdone height outbursts, even for Ed, are ruining it. Really irritating

Catherine is getting on my nerves in this. Why does she feel the need to police what he reads? She's so irritating and nosy. If he was enjoying it why does she feel like she has to make him do something more 'normal' cos she's a bitch?

Yeah, no, that's not how hospitals work. And why the hell would Catherine be the one to take him home? There's a lot of dramatic license taken in this story for the sake of convenience.

That nurse isn't very good at her job and it shouldn't be played for laughs - Catherine, you bitch.

I'm rereading this fic for what feels like the umpteenth time and it never gets old. This is such a creative crossover idea, one I never would have considered on my own. The characterizations are so spot on, and the way Ed interacts with the CSI team is so satisfying. Your pacing is sublime, and it's just so relaxing to read something so well written that I don't have to be on edge for something that'll make me go 'nope, I'm done.' An ultimate favourite that I wish I could goad my friends into reading.

Holy buckets. Beautiful. Long, but beautiful and totally worth it