Reviews for Bump in the Night
Auua Ytjoml chapter 1 . 3/26
made me smile :-)
just finished re-reading "sketchbook" Did you ever do anything more with that sequal you mentioned?
bibliophilea chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
And birds. The birds start up around 4. And insomniac college students of course, can't forget them!
Fiddlehoffer chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
I liked it!
Batty Buttercups chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Awwwww. I love the way you write Sam - snark with specks of sweet.
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Aww! So cute and funny! I was smiling the whole time. :D

This piece encapsulates Sam completely. Her running commentary is spot-on and totally in character. Scathing and sarcastic, but with that sweet twist at the end that makes her lovable. Haha.

I loved it and think it deserves more reviews! Thanks!

Sapphireswimming
SapphireSecret chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
That's sweet. Nice fic, well done. It made me smile.
Alemantele chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Ok, I've read 'Phantom's Sketchbook' and I completely and totally fell in love with it. I was extremely lazy then and decided not to leave a review. And I couldn't sleep today so I decided to go browse some fanfiction and thought what the heck and re-read 'Phantom's Sketchbook'.(well I still didn't leave a review but I think I'll pop by and leave one later). Then I checked what other stories you had and came across this one. And I liked it so much I just had to review. Part of the reason I lved it so was because of the summary. Right now it's about 4:17am and something abot the intro of 'There is something entirely inhuman about the hours between three and five o'clock in the morning. It is a time better left to ghosts, goblins and things that go bump in the night.' combined with the current time that just mesmerized me. And I admit I did sit there shivering at the prospects of what exactly did go bump in the night and I think that I won't be sleeping tonight considering the things I thought about. And then I actually read your fanfic and I gotta say, you got some talent! It's just that you have a way with somehow connecting to the characters while still staying away. Man that is something I've been trying to achieve in my writing since forever.(dont read my fanfics they're twilight and crap and since word is down on my computer I can't post anything new and hopefully better) And you totally got it. And even though it's probably be

ause I'm too tired to go look through your story I can't really fond anything wrong about it. But you might want to change Sam's choice of swear words. Bloody hell is typically British and I doubt Americans use it as much. You might want to go with simply hell or maybe something different. And gosh I rambled on a lot for a Drabble now didn't I? Oh well. And seriously, DON'T read my fanfics. I myself want to puke from the stupidness of them and now that my twilight induced buzz has worn off I doubt I'll ever write for that fandom ever again. I might PM you if my damn computer decides to start working again and let me post the good stories (because I am totally o sessed with DP at the moment). Reply and let me know if you want me to! And I've rambled on enough.

Ciao!
ArellaoftheLuvara chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Yay, a little friendship/romance and contemplation to smooth over the angst-waves I'm riding. True friendship: Freezing your bum off at almost four in the morning, knowing you'll be *massively* grounded for it later, and doing it anyway to help a friend.

The line(s) that stuck out the most for me, in this piece, were:

"Amazing how quickly you can get used to that. Flash, blue, flash, green, flash, Fenton, flash, Phantom. It doesn’t matter, it’s still just Danny."

So accurate, striking in its lack of unnecessary filler words.
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Aww~!

I love DannyxSam moments.

They are SO meant for eachother!

*hugs*
MyAibou chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
"Amazing how quickly you can get used to that. Flash, blue, flash, green, flash, Fenton, flash, Phantom. It doesn’t matter, it’s still just Danny."

YES. I think that one line captures how Sam sees Danny more than anything I've ever read. Great one-shot!
HopelessxRomanticx1993 chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
Aw. Cute fluffyness. Hopeless out.
Zuzanny chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
That is so SWET!
A. LaRosa chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
Short but very sweet. Nice job!

-A
Devianta chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Loved it. It was hilarious...Well, my kind of hilarious anyway. Ilove sarcasm. It's my favorite literary device. So, good job!
dizappearingirl chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
I like this! _ I love the tone especially-definitely what I'd be thinking that late in the night...er..early in the morning. Lol. And it all works out and everything.

I love the line: "Flash, blue, flash, green, flash, Fenton, flash, Phantom. It doesn’t matter, it’s still just Danny."

That's really cool. _
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