awesome job Wench. i really enjoyed reading this.

Aww, it's over :(

I enjoyed the story from start to finish, it was funny and action packed. Great writing!

My advice to increase your readers is to include hurt Sam or hurt Dean or both in your summary and than really whump them (whenever I see hurt Dean in the summary, I will automatically read it)...for some reason us girls on this site really have a thing for hurt Winchesters and chick flick moments and the more you drag out the hurt, the more people seem to respond. Well at least we all share the same brand of crazy :)

Love ya Wench and I can't wait for the next one...I live for angst!

Yup, you've earned extra cookies for this chapter...all that Winchester hurt and pain is the way to my heart.

Loved the decapitation scene!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

That was just mean...while I appreciate the hurt Dean, you can't leave him dying and than end.

My poor heart can't handle any more cliffies, you're going to turn me grey before my time!

No cookies because you're bad!

update soon!

Happy Thursday!

"Dean gave him a curt nod, not willing to let Herne know that Sam was being the Ocean to his Eleven."

You have the best expressions, thanks for the giggle :)

So, what's the plan, you left us with a mini cliffie...come on Wench, I need to know, get posting!

Loved it, extra cookies for you, update soon!

"THAT BOY IS MINE! AND NO ONE CAN STOP ME!"

"Ya know, having two guys fighting over you is kinda gay, there Sammy."

"Oh, shut up ya antiquer...Whoa!"

Oh Wench, thanks for that chapter...you made me laugh!

I am thrilled to not have to read another emo filled, angst ridden story, I need a break after last night.

Loved the chapter, you write awesome Dean snark and Herne is my new hero for getting rid of the "yeddie" (can you tell I'm still bitter after last night's eppy)

Story is flowing wonderfully and you're doing an amazing job with the dialogue!

Cookies for you, update soon!

There were way too many dirty references in this chapter for me to comment on and since you don't want a page of gutter quotes than I'm just going to leave those alone.

Great chapter, I'm happy that you've reunited our boys even though it doesn't look good for them.

More cokies, update again soon!

I can't believe you added the YED into the story...wasn't Herne enough for Sammy to deal with...you're tough!

Great writing, loved Sammy's ability to charm old Herne just proving nobody is immune to Sammy's puppy dog eyes.

Update soon, I want to know what the YED is doing here.

Hmm I always thought you'd do a bit more with this part ;) But I liked it.

What can I say?

YAY!

:D

Bum Bum Bum But will they? *gasps*

"Sam, c'mon, pay attention here! Now's not the time for porn."

"Shut up, I'm looking into legends for the area..."

"Someone woke up on the wrong side of the floor this morning. Whaddya got?"

lmao

High Winchesters Squee Love.

You know I love it ;)

Silk Pillows, nice touch!

Thanks for giving Dean a head injury, a concussed Winchester is always cute.

So you've got Sam out on the Wild Hunt, that should be fun.

"Uh, you mean actual coffee, right?"

That line made me giggle, very Dean like, nice job!

Twizzlers and peanut m&ms for you, update soon!

Well that will be a blow to Dean's ego, getting knocked out by a prostitue will be a funny story for later.

Great job with this chapter, you've written Dean's snark brilliantly (though I shouldn't be surprised since that is your specialty)

Very intrigued as to what the hunt is and I can't believe you left Sammy all alone...evil Wench!

Thanks for the hurt Dean but I kinda need a worried Sammy to mother hen him so lets work on saving Sammy!

Cookies for you, update soon!