Reviews for Drunk
TeenageMutantNinjaTurtleLover1 chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
I love this! So many feels!
kim romeo chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
I think it was very funny you should put more storys like that
cm chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
very sad, and very wonderful.
hkeren40 chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
YASS! I read this a awhile back, then I found it again! I would love it if u would make more chapters! Maybe some Leo X Raph! Lol like Raph is stunned that Leo is drunk
Firebird Scratches chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
This is really well written. It's late and I'm not very coherent, but I really enjoyed this character insight. Poor Leo. He tries so hard and they just resent him for it.
dreamlittleyo chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
beautifully done, I ADORED this!
redxcanary chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
aww poor leo :(

very good story, original

LilNinjaWolf chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Wow, it really seemed like it was Raph in the beginning. You did a great job with this.
Alonein-Darkness7 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Wonderful one-shot right here! I love drunk fics and they're always really amazing when it's not Raph. Seriously, I really liked how you tapped into Leo's thoughts and doubts. Very nice!
ducky76 chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
I love how you present all of Raph and Leo's issues in your stories. It is one of the most interesting things about the family dynamic of the Ninja Turtles, and you explore both of their understandings of their situation so well. Every one of the stories is so deep and thoughtful. This one is no exception, and I loved your take on Leo's insecurities and fears for his family. And Don is the perfect brother to witness and silently examine both Raph's and Leo's problems.

I think you've got to be one of the best of the writer's of TMNT fanfiction.
Winnychan chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
This was really fantastic. It might be my favorite of the work I've seen of yours so far, but that's a really tough call to make because you're very talented.

This was just an amazing look into both Leo and Don's characters. The idea that Leo would get drunk on his own is not something I would have considered before, or easily swallowed from just any author I think... but this story made me buy it hook, line, and sinker.

There were just so many powerful moments in this fic. Thanks again for writing it. A part of me wishes to see it, if the natural follow-up ever did occur... (them all getting drunk together, I mean). It might be a hoot, or a vehicle for more angst and exploration, depending on how you ran with it.

But another part of me appreciates that you left this up to the reader's imagination. Somehow I'm disinclined to believe that it would be quite the easy solution that Donnie seems to be hoping for at the end of this oneshot.

Excellent work, once again. I can definitely see why people speak of you like you are one of the stars of this fandom. :)


CelicaChick chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
Sneaky sneaky! I was expecting a raph fic. Even though Leo is my fav I was going to read this "Raph" fic cause I like the way you've characterized them! i look forward to reading more. Cheers.
midge lupin chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
This story gave me chills. You capture each character so perfectly! I'm so glad I found your fics! *zooms off to read more*
Elsiah chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Wonderful oneshot. I can definitely see Don as the "caretaker" of his brothers. His final conclusion holds a bit of dark humor that is drowned out by the fact that, sadly, Don speaks the truth. The solution may only be found within the problem. Those final two sentences pulled the entire fic together. Great angst, and great work!
Herr Wozzeck chapter 1 . 4/17/2007

Nice angstiness. I like how the argument is resolved, and I also like the topic of the argument.

So yes.

Please keep on writing the way I know you can!
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