Reviews for Distraction |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this really only your second lemon?! I loved it! It was by far one of the best lemons I've ever read and trust me I read a lot haha this was the first of your works I've read but you seem to have quite a talent I look forward to more of your works! |
![]() ![]() This is like so cute make more I can't stop reading over again |
![]() ![]() That was the best thing I have ever read. Making fukit a jerk made acurit and cute in a way |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was really, really cute! Adorable! I've always shipped them so much and agh! They're like my #1 OTP! THIS was AWSOME AND ITS BE SO COOL IF YOU COULD MAKE A MULTI CHAPTER FIC OF AHIRU AND FAKIR~~~~ |
![]() ![]() Uh... O.o |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was so beautiful! I cried at one point, you truely have the talent to become an amazing author!There were some parts that were so smooth I fell on my ass. 11/10 XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! Your story was so amazing! :) I totally loved it! 3 The lemon was really hot! :P I really hope you will make another Fakir X Ahiru with a more explicit lemon. You followed Fakir's personality perfectly same with Ahiru's. I love Princess Tutu. I wish there would have been a kissing scene between Fakir and Ahiru. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is epic. Very well done, and actually very well in character. The fact that she talks too much keeps her very much Ahiru, and Fakir is a great bundle of conflicting emotions. I like how he uses dance terms for their...er... coupling. :D There are some grammar errors, but not so many that it breaks up the flow of the story. Overall 4.7/5 Stars |
![]() ![]() this is awsome! |
![]() ![]() This was absolutely amazing writing, you say it's only your 2nd(?) lemon but it was very well written and it definitely did not seem like you would be unexperienced in writing this kind of thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG IT WAS AWESOME XDD GREAT WORK |
![]() ![]() THANK YOU OMG. the ending left me unsatisified with my fakir and ahiru feels. I needed this and you typed it wonderfully thank you XD |
![]() ![]() that was... SO well written! lol keep up the good work! this is the first fakir/ahiru fanfiction that was as detailed as yours was! i give u my full support 33 |
![]() ![]() wow. that was amazing. WRITE MOOOOAARRRRRR! D8 |
![]() ![]() love it! |