|Reviews for Negotiations|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/21
What the HELL!?
That was so funny! They just did all that and everyone else was just waiting for them to come out and they didn't even noticed when Aslan shouted "Jadis!" and they both rolled down the hill.
I love it! ;D
| jadis1300 chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
laughed myself to death
| the White Witch 1234 chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
very funny you have comic talent
| mirrorOfsin chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
'she settled for stomping her foot and mentally counting to ten.'
Lol I personally found this very funny and strangely i could really picture it. hehe the race was a good idea. If you do more i'd certainly read XD
| Kirux chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
"IT'S TIME TO DUEL!"
I'm pretty sure I died a little when i read that. I love the Narnia books and this was so wonderful. Except for a couple typos it was great.
| fledge chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Well, any humourfic about this sort of thing must necessarily BE ooc, so that's not a problem. A crazy little piece, at any rate, with the occasional typo.