Reviews for Negotiations
jadis1300 chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
laughed myself to death
the White Witch 1234 chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
very funny you have comic talent
mirrorOfsin chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
'she settled for stomping her foot and mentally counting to ten.'

Lol I personally found this very funny and strangely i could really picture it. hehe the race was a good idea. If you do more i'd certainly read XD
Kirux chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
"IT'S TIME TO DUEL!"

I'm pretty sure I died a little when i read that. I love the Narnia books and this was so wonderful. Except for a couple typos it was great.

You're wonderful

Kirux
fledge chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Well, any humourfic about this sort of thing must necessarily BE ooc, so that's not a problem. A crazy little piece, at any rate, with the occasional typo.