Reviews for Dare
u chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
So good..
jy24 chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
Like it, it was hilarious in the beginning and very good with the rest.
Mine ShadowMaster chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
Fairly new in the fandom and hunting for fics I found yours, and well... I already said it, but it was hot as hell! XD
I'm fan of Kanda being rude but well, Kanda burning in desire is also a good look
Oooh! I don't think it's really important, I have read several people writing it differently, but I'm used to the name that appears in the manga, so... If you want (because the fic it's yours and therefore yours to do as you want) change the name Linali for "Lenalee".
Otherwise, it was a good one shoot. Yay, I need more!
AngelRuby235 chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
"Do you know how hard you made me? Do you understand how fucking irresistible you looked dancing like that?" Kanda whispered harshly...
I admit I died at this moment & went to yaoi heaven...Kanda is terribly hot! Allen is terribly cute! Can there ever be a better combination? Yullen ftw :D
AllenWalker1018 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
I love this so much! So beautifully written! I wish I could write that well!
Jean Sumar chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
LOVED it. God that was hilarious, and waaaaaaaaaaaay sexy. ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
You're amazing :D this story was great!
9foxgrl chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
XD omg this was such a cute;/steamy fic.
I don't even want to know why Lavi had this outfit
Celestial-Cas chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
This was amazing. The idea was very creative and your descriptive skills are astounding. I could see Allen dancing, wrapped in silks. That's something not a lot of people can do. I can't wait to read more of your work :)
Firediva0 chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
I'm with Kanda in heaven right now! I love it! It was absolutely amazing!
the critic chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
I liked the style of your writting and the plot. Also I think you should add more.
kloveyaoi1 chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Mephistopheles7 chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
It'd be funny if there was an epilogue where lavish and everyone saw what happened or found out the results of the dare. But the ending was cute.
Honochan77 chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
So hot...x/x Definitely LOVE it! *nosebleed*
Bondomu chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Wow I love it so much! It was brilliant and well written. As well as funny! :)
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