Reviews for Brave New World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You need to work on your POV or scene changes.. it just goes from one person to the next without a ‘by your leave’. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So the Cylons attacked an Earth colony? And they weren’t immediatly smoked like a dry blunt? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly just want the story to move forward, thus far I’m bored and having issues following things. |
![]() ![]() Nice g |
![]() ![]() Good g |
![]() ![]() ![]() STRANGE THEY ABANDON A BASE IF IT IS IMPORTANT . |
![]() ![]() ![]() they found others ok . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work. |