Reviews for Depth
PurpleNerd03 chapter 1 . 8/21
flikaroo chapter 1 . 8/13
All Donnie needed was some brotherly comfort and bamn, the electrical issue was fixed. Yay to Raph and Donnie moments.
CupcakeGoodness101 chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
D'awww I love Raph's caring attitude. 3
Aeryn Lavanthia chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Awwww! Cute story :)
Hannio chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
I really loved this fic! Its always nice to read a story where Raph is written as a proper good brother!

Good job!
starkling chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
Aww, Raph! :D That was so cute!
XxXIch liebe DeutschXxX chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
WOW! That really was the highest level of fluff! But still, who doesn't love a good bit of fluff, especially when there are turtles involved!
Patterson1219 chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Oh wow, I think I'm in love with Raph when he's being sweet! Aw, and poor Don! Absolutely adorable one shot.. :) But you've got more stories! Whoo hoo, I'm gonna go read 'em!
Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Yay for more fluff! Simply loved the little interaction between Donnie and Ralph. It's not very often we get to see Don get so frustrated and I'm glad that Ralph came along to talk him and help him see through it.

/“Hey Don?”


“You know I love you, right?”/

*squeals* It's rare to see such a soft side to Ralph and I'll taking advantage of it right now. THAT WAS SO CUTE!
princessebee chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
*applauds* highly enjoyable. Love!
arianshifter chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Perfect! It sounds like you have Raph down to a 'T'. :D Anyways, cute story. Sometimes you get hung up on the simplest things...
Reinbeauchaser chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Hey there!

Well, thought it was time to explore your take on the TMNT's. First up, two areas of interest - one made me smile, one made me quirk an eyebrow. :0)

“I’m sure we could just let Leo go on guard duty,” drawled Raphael. “Just let him know one of the men left the construction site and he’ll be sitting outside the lair all week with his katanas anyway, and we can sleep easy for a few days.”

“Well that might fix the problem for a few days but I still need to repair the system,” Donatello mumbled. “Leo can’t live outside permanently, however much you’d like it.”

“I guess it’d probably get boring after a while, having no one to tick me off. I mean, you and Mikey have your moments, but man, he’s narrowed it down to a fine art.”

Loved the above set of lines. Very funny! :0)

Um, as for the following part, prior to this, Don was just sitting in his chair, frustrated. No mention of his taking up anything to 'carve', so this was rather sudden for me - - -

“What I meant,” he said at length, watching the younger turtle carve jagged shapes into the wooden tabletop.

Overall, though, a very nice fluffy one-shot.

I can't believe that Raph is always an insensitive prick or Don's always 'getting it right'. It's nice to see a little encouragement coming from Raph and qualify his brainy brother's role in the clan. Nice to see Don struggle a bit, too. Makes him - real. :0)\

Not too many Don/Raph stories, unless they're slash - and what's with that, anyway? Doesn't fit with their canon at all, but your little bit here certainly did.

I love well-rounded characters, rather than the two dimensional version that most writers stick to; it makes the TMNT's far more real than not. :0)

Great job with this! And I see you've written yet another little 'fluff' story.

Guess I'm not done reading, yet, eh? :0)

Be blessed,

RandomPenName chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
-giggles- I love fluff and you write it so well!

Let me know if you want to co write one with me!

[]my stories aren't on here i just made a new one the site made mine go poofers my o;ld stories are still under lyknscribe
aronoiiel chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
aww that was a spiffy piece of fluff hehe poor Donnie.
DisneyDelinquent chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
Another triumph! I read Duty and left a review ... what I said there goes ditto for this one! Great work.
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