Reviews for Breakfast For Losers
CSIDani chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
I am not a Nick/Sofia shipper, though I did come here trough their board at Talk, but I must tell you that I loved this.

I found it well written, simple yet everything id well said, and very beautiful. I love the ending "He smiled, and instead of replying he bent down and placed a kiss on her forehead, pretending to ignore the tears in her eyes, knowing how much she hated appearing weak." Lovely )

Good work!
barqualounger chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
This is a pleasing story. Do you mean for it to be a standalone or more chapters? I'm hoping for the former! My favorite paragraph is where Sofia's contemplating Nick as a CSI vs. cop:

"...She'd always meant to ask him what drove him to the sciences, when everything about him so screamed cop."

Very nice phrasing.

One thing: although I understand why you want Nick to be driving to the scene (great observation time for Sofia), do you think he'd really be driving a patrol car? I know nothing about law enforcement.

Happy writing!
VaveAma92 chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
I loved it. Keep writing more pleaase