|Reviews for Tales of Discovery|
| FantomoDrako chapter 2 . 10/26/2008
Oh my, you really DID submit something! Haha, just messin' with you. I was going to write something for DP Day of Angst, but my net got cut off for a month and I lost my enthusiasm...
I glad you wrote this for me to read though. Makes me feel better because I know Jack's a good-hearted guy.
Short, yes, but excellent! I love it!
Keep the tales coming,
| bluename chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
You are right! it made me go "Aw" and I LOVED IT! at the end! because I really believed that Jack thought it was the real Danny!
AWSOME piece of work, as all of your writtings, so lovely *huggles Jack*
You almost made me cry by the way XD and I wsih I had known about this angst day so I could have written something u_u
but anyways I'm glad to find out you wrote something, and I enjoyed it much more than I thought!
have a nice day :)
| ShadowLord9 chapter 2 . 10/3/2008
You...You UPDATED? Head for the hills! It's the apocalypse! Maybe not, but THANK YOU! Now if only you could get the next chapter of Tortured Revenge up...
Actually, the funny thing is, I just read two other authors' Angst Day posts, and yours was actually longer than one them! The other author also usually posts really long chapters, too...
Anyway, thank you so much! Once I got the rest of these things read, maybe I'll actually update my own story for a change... Great oneshot! Keep up the good work! (or if that fails, just finish the stuff you have now! l )
| Erratta chapter 2 . 10/2/2008
This /was/ a different kind of angst from your usual fare but I definitely enjoyed it. It's lighter, with undercurrents of humour, but still pulls on the ol' heartstrings.
I admit to feeling kind of sorry for Jack until the end, thinking that he was so oblivious to the Dannybot not being Danny and expecting an answer… and then he knew all along and it go so much more angsty! Good ending, in other words.
I like what Jack had to say here as well, though I can't help feeling at times that it's a little OOC of him, just the way things are worded. 6 But it's late, so maybe I'm misreading things…. Always possible.
Anyways, good story, and here's to more angst practice!
| dizappearingirl chapter 2 . 10/1/2008
(On cue) Aw...
As soon as I grasped the scene I realized he was talking to robo-Danny and I was like, "oh no! Jack's gonna confess and talk and Danny doesn't even get to hear it!" I was so afraid he would take the silence the wrong way! BUT HE DIDN'T! Ha! Jack Fenton is much more observant than most people believe! :D It's nice when people write about him that way instead of the usual.
So, good job. Nice twist at the end. And really quite plausible.
| CatalystOfTheSoul chapter 2 . 10/1/2008
Oh...Oh my God...the BEST piece I've read so far today, short but...my English teacher always says: "Writing is best expressed short and sweet. There is no need for unnecessary prepositions, detail, or word repeation."
So, a wonderful contribution to angst day! XD, thanks for helping flood the archives!
| Shining Zephyr chapter 2 . 10/1/2008
OUCH, Frodo. That was really sad, actually. I'm reading and thinking to myself, 'I wish Jack could really talk to Danny like that. It was sad and angsty and I really, really liked it. You did a great job on this. I... wow. I'm at a loss for words here.
| inukagome15 chapter 2 . 10/1/2008
That last sentence is priceless... *snickers* I've never heard of International Angst Day for DP fans. If I did, I might have waited to post my own angst one-shot. Oh well. *shrugs*
This could certainly be true. It's funny, too. XD
I'll be waiting to see what's next in this installment.
| Chaos Dragon chapter 2 . 10/1/2008
that was lovely angst!
| xheartkreuzx chapter 2 . 10/1/2008
your right. it did make me go 'aw' ]
| DannyPhantomFreeek chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Sorry bout the Anonymous Review but...
I this so much!
But... when are you going to update this? If you won't please at least mark it off as complete... Please?
| Shade rose chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
| TheGhostHybrid chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
This was...amazing! I love the completely beautiful and totally realistic idea of Jack and Maddie present for the accident. It really portrays their loving parent side. I must see more! *waves fish in air for more chapters*
| Anon chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
This looks really good! I saw in your profile what plans you have next, and I'm dying to read the one about Dash! Please, I know you're bussy, but update ASAP!
| LolaRoll chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
i really like it, it was a unique idea and i luv how you wrote it. update soon!