Reviews for Eden
bitch chapter 50 . 7/21
fuck that was delicious
thank you for writing this
however, i did grow attached to avery, which i did not expect
sam853 chapter 10 . 7/11
no freaken way!
sam853 chapter 7 . 7/11
Good for Hermione! I love Ron in this!
sam853 chapter 4 . 7/11
that was so brutal
sam853 chapter 3 . 7/11
i cant believe this..omg
sam853 chapter 2 . 7/11
i cannot wait to read this. your writing style is perfect and even though i know that there will be no happy ending in the traditional sense, im gonna read this through because the premise is so good
Guest chapter 7 . 7/6
It's so chilling how
Lucius made Hermione stab her own friend. Under the imperius curse.

You have to be truly cunning and a bit twisted in the mind to come up with something so cruel and yet effective.

Lucius is exactly the type of person you do not want to be tortured by, not in your worse nightmares.
He was too effective and the dialogue is just as chilling.

Wow.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/6
There are so many fanfictions were Ron's character is bashed and shown as stupid, mean or dumb.

Can I say how much I appreciate that you didn't turn Ronald Weasley into a bumbling fool but made him the good friend and kind, brave person he was in canon?

Seriously I love your Ron. The story is so much more because you made him a three dimensional character we can love too.

You wrote him better than JK Rowling and then some.

Oh poor Ronald, how he will suffer for Hermione and because his heart is so pure and true to her.

It just makes the downfall of Hermione and Lucius that much more terrible and captivating
Guest chapter 5 . 7/6
Oh my goodness
I loved how you slipped in the dream of her future daughter and son, before she even knows that she'll ever fall in love or be loved by Lucius.
The amount of foreshadowing here is just beautiful and I love how it all plays out tendril by tendril into this eery but stunning story that no one who reads it can ever forget

In love with this story probably forever.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/6
"Why couldn't I be brave when it mattered?"
Hermione blames herself so much but what she went through would've broken anybody
She is actually so incredibly strong to have even survived

Even Lucius eventually sees that when he calls her smart, intelligent and brave

Hermione you are brave. I think Lucius sees it too "Well done mudblood"

Even though the "mudblood" part is insulting it's almost a compliment coming from him

Bella is horrible beyond words. *shudders* Hermione should be more frightened of Bellatrix than anyone else.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/6
Waiting only adds to the tension
and you can totally see Hermione's fear building.
Wow.
Hermione is pretty tough that she manages to keep her sense of humor even this long
and she's taunting him with the snow white names.
Then she breaks down bit by bit "I start to sob
I can't help it. The tears roll down my cheeks and my nose runs. I cry and cry, long into the night, with no-one to hear me."
Lucius is probably the last person she'd want to see write now. She didn't have anyone to soothe her here
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6
This story starts so dark and she starts off so innocent and she's complaining about little things like not having a bed to sleep and not having any dignity
or being treated like an animal.

It really screws me up how this story gets gradually darker and darker...
yet somehow, both Hermione and the reader, get used to the darkness
get used to the abuse
until finally it's full blown Stockholm Syndrome.

This story is one incredible mind f***. Pure drugs in literary form.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6
I actually appreciate the warning you start this off with.
Because you really avoided the cliches with this story and that's something I appreciate the f*** out of.
It bugs me to no end when lumione fanfics are cliche
I hate cliche stories where Lucius is written like he's just a misunderstood sparkling snowflake.
Uhh no.
Lucius wasn't a misunderstood snowflake, he was a bad man who did pretty horrible things, not the least of which was trying to kill Ginny and open the chamber
of secrets. Plus both wizarding wars must have kept him busy with evil stuff
we can only imagine, right? *shudders*
Your portrayal of Lucius is probably the best and only realistic one ever written in fanfiction.
It's still breathtaking.
nerdylittlesecret chapter 49 . 5/24
rereading this chapter for the umpteenth time. Freaking love this story!
But how did Bellatrix sneak up without them seeing/hearing?
Its a little farfetched that they wouldn't notice a madwoman creeping about after being amped up on almost-dying-adrenaline.
nerdylittlesecret chapter 48 . 5/17
What would it take to get you to write an alternate ending with a couple of gratuitous Hermione-nurses-him-back-to-health chapters sprinkled it. You could keep it pretty gory if you wanted too!
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