|Reviews for Eden|
| golden peaches chapter 13 . 6/14/2007
*relaxed sigh* It's like I'm a junkie for your story and I've just gotten a fix. Seriously, it's my favourite story at the moment and I get very excited when I find an alert in my inbox.
I KNEW he wouldn't be able to kill her, he's grown too attached, no matter how much he tries to deny it. My favourite part was when he carried her in his arms. But of course he has to be a jackass in the end and ruin in. Although...the final paragraphs give me hope yet! I'm conflicted as to whether I want something to eventuate between them or not. No, not love or anything, that's not possible. But..hell, I don't know what I want. I'll just leave it up to you. I trust you do to what's best. Keep up the awesome work!
| Schwertlilie81 chapter 13 . 6/14/2007
I really adore Your style of writing.
How you hint at emotions without letting them being showed.
How You develop this complicted character of Lucius Malfoy through the eyes of his victim with glimpses and contradicting actions.
From the first chapter on I had the feeling there was more on Lucius behaviour then he let see.
This has been confirmed over the chapters, but not cleared which emotion it is.
Hate, loathing, some kind of possessiveness, sadistic pleasure to hurt in body and mind, some twisted well hidden kind of love?
I believe would he not be the dark Lords most Faithfull, he would have reacted like Antonin by now. And perhaps not. It would have spoiled his fun in torturing her.
In my opinion he sees the tortur as his only chance to be as near as he is allowed by his own principles and he dark Lords will. And the dark lord sees this in his mind.
He will never let her go, except he dark Lord requests it of him.
Your piece of writing is just a psychological masterpiece of charcteranalysis trough the eyes of the victim.
You can imagine meeting him like that in reality and fearing it. He is evil, but not plain like the others, but with whole heart and knowing and absolutly willingly. Not insane like Bella, but some kind of twisted sane.
| HowAreYou chapter 13 . 6/13/2007
What a wonderful story! You are a marvelous author, and I can't wait till the next chapter.
| angelamarclain chapter 13 . 6/13/2007
hey...you updated! im so glad...if i thought severus snape was going to be an addiction, that was before i found your story and lucius malfoy...great chapter,by the way! indeed, your characterization has always been the biggest lure of your stories and how the characters' actions stay true to their personality...
there is an attraction between them surely...that much is evident..wonder how the attacks gonna be? maybe harry'll force himself to get captured just to see hermione...? anyway, can u give a tentative date for the posting of the next chapter..? it'll save me a lot of time switching on the comp and connecting to the net and prevent me from getting really disappointed when i dont see an update..two words for you... update soon!
| Lynn8687 chapter 13 . 6/13/2007
Well, Lucius better be careful putting his trust in the Weasley family's alliance to Voldemort, he may be end for a surprise. Poor Harmione is all I can say and the state that she is in. I hope the sun shines for her soon. Update soon.
| The-Lady-Layla chapter 13 . 6/13/2007
This is really great! I wish you could up date every day XD I always look forward to reading a new chapter in this story. Its one of my absolute favorites!
| sarahsparrow007 chapter 13 . 6/13/2007
I really enjoyed this chapter, despite the brevity of it. The only thing I'm curious about is earlier in the chapter, Hermione addresses Lucius by his first name, and he places the Cruciatus curse on her. She does this later in the chapter and he says nothing about it. Please update soon! I've waited so long for this chapter and then it's so short? I'm in agony!
| Cogitatione chapter 13 . 6/13/2007
ARGH! Lucius is such an enigma! I love it! You write from Hermione's POV so well. It's wonderful. This is just...awesome. I'm eagerly awaiting Chapter 14!
| HugsForPenguin chapter 13 . 6/13/2007
I love that you're so consistent with these _
| Cogitatione chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
It has been torture these past few days, because all of your updates on your profile page make me think that I'm going to come on tomorrow and...it will be there! I'm itching to read it just as you are itching to post it! ARGH!
Hopefully it'll be up by tomorrow-I have exams all this week, and I need something to distract me.
I know this is totally random, but have you ever heard of a song called Cristifori's Dream by David Lanz? It's a piano piece, and it's one of the most beautiful, peaceful songs I've ever heard. You should listen to it. Oh, God, I'm promoting.
Well. Anyway. Impatiently waiting for this awesome fic.
| Methylethyldeth chapter 12 . 6/11/2007
I found this fic a few days ago, and wow! This has to be one of the best stories I've seen for a good long while, though I must admit it is exhausting and unpleasant to read at times. :p
Yet I keep reading.
The dynamics between characters is well done, and each chapter just makes me go "ow." And I thought I was mean when I wrote. My characters have it good.
Looking forward to where you take this next!
| Natalie chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
omg I love your story
at first I wasent to sure but the way you discribe the characters and their emotions is absolutly brillant!
I dont think iv read a story were I wasnt Harry to win the war then I do we I read this
I really hope hermione has her revenge
| lizabeth87 chapter 12 . 6/7/2007
This is absolutely brillant!
| OMariquitaO chapter 12 . 6/7/2007
after reading your story the whole weekend (actually I had to learn but you story was far more interesting than my books) I have no choice but to tell you have great this piece of fiction is.
I started reading with a bit of a doubt, because normally Im not that much into torture, but hey, its a story with Lucius Malfoy in it and so I kept on reading. ;)
You describe his character so well that I can see his face in my mind and imagine the tone he uses when he is saying something. Same with Hermione but your Lucius impressed me even more.
After every chapter I was wondering how the plot could continue and what will happen next and every sentence I read is a pleasure.
I really like your writing style, but I dont know if that information is helpful for you because Im german and maybe not the right person to judge about english writing.
Anyway I enjoy reading this story. I love it. And I love Lucius although he is a cruel bastard.
But in my opinion everybody has a good site. Today I wrote an philosophy exam about a text of Adam Smith and in one sentence he said "Everybody, even a cruel rogue has the ability to feel pity." When I read this I had to think about this story (it doesnt just kept me away from learning but also distracts me during exams. ;))
So please dont let Hermiones prayers come true! Lucius mustnt suffer!
Im looking forward to the next chapter and by the way... the idea of 40 chapters sounds very good to me. Keep on writing. In the meantime I will check your other stories.
| Kiss The Stars With Me chapter 12 . 6/7/2007
Good chappie! You're a very excellent writer, by the way. The story flows well and you seem to really know what you're doing!