|Reviews for Eden|
| Energetic red chapter 50 . 9/5/2013
Loved this, beautifully done. The subtlety is remarkable :D. The way you describe their relationship as an illness, that bit summed it all up perfectly and I understood it all from there. Great job, simply amazing, still wondering who won the war, am guessing the light side? Hopefully. But it doesn't matter and that's what makes this story so great! :D
| Guest chapter 50 . 9/1/2013
Thank you for writing this amazing piece of fanfiction. I'll never forget it. But it my mind, it'll be Ron who dies and Lucius who survives.
| elisyafitry chapter 50 . 8/27/2013
I FUCKING cANTT OMG IM CRYING MY HEART CAN'T COPE
| Mina Monster chapter 50 . 8/27/2013
Oh dear God, almighty!
HOW DARE YOU! I'VE CRIED FOR HALF AN HOUR BECAUSE OF THIS STORY, AND I'M STILL OVERWHELMED WITH EMOTIONS RIGHT NOW! HOW DARE YOU TURN ME INTO A SNIVELLING GIRL! I HAVEN'T CRIED LIKE THAT IN SUCH A LONG TIME! HOW FUCKING DARE YOU!
Well, enough of that. I've known ever since I've read through all your warnings at the beginning of this story that it won't end up with flowers and unicorns $hitting rainbows and puking glitters. Kinda prepared me for the end, I guess. Although, after reading this, the fact that it never really happened in the real world,and that it's a crack pairing makes me think that Lucius being gone isn't all that bad. It's only fanfiction, anyway. We readers could just conjure up a different ending in our minds. What if Lucius lived and he and Hermione actually had made it out alive? What if they really did bought a house, had children, got a dog, argued about mortgage, and sat on the garden, drinking tea? How would Lucius have reacted during Hermione's birth as he held his son for the first time? Or what if... It was Ron who died so Lucius and Hermione could live? Aah... So many possibilities...
Anyway, I would shower you with praises and complements, had it not been for the fact that it will be redundant. I mean, come on! Over three thousand reviews and you can't tell me you haven't got tired of people telling you how bloody awesome you are!
So I'll just leave you this review, instead. Not in the hopes of you seeing it as unique, but in the hopes that it might give you even a hint of the strength of the maelstrom of emotions that your story has aroused in me. It has made me suffer, lose hope, hate, lose breath, scared, nervous, and most of all...
It has made me fall-in-love.
To who, I don't know. But the moment that I recognized the first signs of affection/obsession, I knew that I have fallen, and that I will not be able to put my phone down, anymore- or sleep properly for that matter. Although, just to let you know, your story still plagued me up to my dreams. A beautiful curse, I'd like to call it. Damn you to hell and back for being so talented! .
ARGH! I'm babbling. I'm going to end this now. I look forward to the next story I will read from you! :)
| the-valkyrie-writes chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Just started reading the story after somebody drew a Schindler's List comparison on a forum - really fabulous so far - amazing characterization and I will definitely read all the rest!
| RubyMouse chapter 50 . 8/14/2013
This was amazing.
| vampireluph chapter 21 . 8/11/2013
Amazing! Wonderful! I can't even say how much I adore this story, wonderfully written, with many kinds of amazing plots.
well, I can't decipher much of this story anymore, because I TOTALLY love it 3
but somehow I can't take my mind off on how Hermione kept failing to hurt Lucius on the previous chapters before this. It is very infuriating actually... Did she really that fool that she'd never snatch whether Draco / Dolohov 's wands. (Dolohov's died after all for God's sake . )
But despite the lacking of the story, I still love this story so much and I will absolutely encourage my friends to read this fanfic! Well done
| Anonymous chapter 50 . 8/5/2013
This story is just beautiful. At first I was a little annoyed with the first person narrating and the repetitiveness but I am so glad i continued reading! That ending left tears streaming down my face.
Well done on writing such an excellent piece of fanfiction.
| Hicupcake chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I'm reading this for the third time, because I literally can't get enough. This is by far the best piece of work, published or non-published, that I have ever read. I don't know who you are but I will find you and I will kiss you and thank you for sharing this with the rest of us. I can't even describe what this story makes me feel, I struggle to get my life back to normal each time I read this yet I keep coming back for more. You should be proud of yourself and I look forward to anything else you may choose to write. Thank you.
| Alias chapter 37 . 7/25/2013
Really - I thought I could get over my pet hate of first-person but this and Hermione's repetitive monolgue and her wimpering portrayal has condemned it.
This story has bern a round about - and not in a good way. Why does Hermione have to go over the same thing three times in completely different arcs when she herself doesn't recognise herself as Hermione anymore but rather than Mudblood - its just down right infuriating when you just think - oh wait she might rediscover herself now - OH WAIT ITS JUST THE SAME SHIT AGAIN!
Stopped reading at this chapter. So fucking angry right now.
| Nina chapter 50 . 7/24/2013
Wow... no words.
| xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 33 . 7/20/2013
I'm so torn i pity both Lucius and Ron. Oh Ron.
| xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 4 . 7/20/2013
though the tragic end of Lucius crushed me if I had only read up to all these chaptes where he is merciless and downright evil I would say his death was fitting but since he later on gradually reveals a more humane side to him I can't help but pity him.
| xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 50 . 7/20/2013
Yes there is no denying that he had been brutal and cruel to her physically and emotionally, but any man capably of love is capable of saving and I believe if they were given the chance of a lifetime, he would have made strives to redeem himself in her eyes solely due to his love for her. Ahh haven't cried this hard in a long time.
| xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 49 . 7/20/2013
how could you ?
Beautiful piece of fanfiction but I just cannot fully grasp it ending in such a way because I can't help but pin for a happy ending.
Just when they were close to living life together as a true couple well at least trying, they are once again denied their chance.