Reviews for admist the wandering souls
sandysea17 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Thanks for wirting a great story about Neil!
Please add more chapters and finished this story:D
sandysea17 chapter 2 . 7/8/2013
Thanks for wirting a great story!
It is an fantacitc story and I'm just loved it.
Please add more chapters and finished this story:D
Silwyna chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
Neil running away from home is an interesting idea; I actually thought about writing a fic like that too someday, but haven't found the time yet.

I like your idea very much, but your story is very difficult to read. I get the feeling that you just wrote it down as you thought about it without thinking about word order, commata, things like that. Have you thought about getting a beta? It might help making this story easier to read. I would love to find out where you are going with this, but as it is it's just too hard to try to follow what you are trying to say.