|Reviews for Jealousy|
| LW12 chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
i love it
| Brp chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
This story continues to be my favorite, no matter how many years pass.
| SheWolfMedjai chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
Please make another!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
| Sunsetcheetah chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
Nice quick read. Maybe to keep it more in character, not having Elisa decide to wear a skirt and heels after learning she was going to deal with Demona would be better. I'd also suggest looking up how to write really hot love scenes. I liked yours a lot but always room for improvement! Besides, then you can write some more for us to read_
| evillullaby6 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
I loved how you didn't rush right into the 'M' part, but let the story build up to it most storys i've read don't it's nice.
| Luxor-DestroyerOfWorlds chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
| jayme.scholtes chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Only one small comment & I'm not being pissy or critical or anything. Demona's eyes glow red when she's angry not white like the boys. That's it. Otherwise awesome story. Later!
| demona voulturi chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
they are a great match!
| Jolliapplegirl chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
You should make another chapter the ssame as this one but completely from Goliaths POV.
| Vampyglamour25 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
| esca6angel chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
It's quite rare for Goliath to be jealous, I like the concept.
| SuperheroAnimeGeek chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
OH THIS WAS AMAZING,I MEAN GOLIATH IS A MALE AND WHEN YOU TRUST PASS ON HIS PROPERTY HE GONNA KICK SOME 'S FUNNY WITH THAT WHOLE " He was so angry his eyes were beginning to glow was also growling viciously at Aidan" I WAS ALL DAMN, SOMEONES GONNA GET IT.
| Red Blaze 16 chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
I have a question: if Elisa is going to help the Gargoyles with Demona, then why is she putting on a skirt and heels? Even if she is attracted to Goliath (and wants to draw his attention), she's also a cop and would know to dress appropriately for the occasion.
Other than that...good story!
| ZayZay1221 chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
i loved it