|Reviews for Transformer Haikus|
| Wacky Walnut chapter 8 . 11/2/2007
hehe good fun these
you don't have to stick to the 5-7-5 structure for a haiku though, I've just been doing them as part of my course and you can break the rules easily as most of the proffessionals do to make things flow a little better. Just thought it would be fun and I loved the Soundwave ones, they were good
| OptimusxElita4ever chapter 8 . 10/26/2007
Sweet. I liked these haikus too! Also I have one at the moment (I know you're sticking to G1 but this one for Beast Wars Rampage came to me all of a sudden):
I haunt you while you
sleep. Dream a little dream and
I'll be hunting you.
(When I get ideas for other TF haikus I'll remember to PM you). :). Cya later!
| Water-smurf chapter 8 . 10/26/2007
I like how you characterize each of the mechs you are writing about. You are creative, and that's an important quality for a haiku writer. Could you do Perceptor soon?
| OptimusxElita4ever chapter 7 . 10/10/2007
Sweet! Now I know what the Aerialbots are like! ;). I don't have any haikus at the moment, but when I do I'll PM you. ;D. Please update soon!
Bumblebee: So how've you been, Optimus?
Optimus: I'm doing well, Bumblebee. Heh, I had four of you to talk to at the store!
Bumblebee: Heh, I have a mini-me and a movie mini-me here as well!
ME: I just bought a Softimus Prime reversible plush today and my Slumblebee has someone like him to talk to. ;).
Bumblebee (Slumblebee): Say Optimus, we also have a mini-you and a movie-you as well!
Optimus (Softimus): I'm sure we could all get along well.
ME: ;). Cya!
| Demon's Rose chapter 7 . 10/9/2007
These are really good!
Could you possibly do one for Sideswipe? I know you already did the twins, but if I'm correct, you did do a separate one for Sunstreaker.
How about either Arcee or Chromia as well?
| OptimusxElita4ever chapter 6 . 10/1/2007
Heya! Glad you updated, I especially liked th Jazz one! Heh, when I read this fic, it seems my poetic creativity starts spinning its wheels! Hope you enjoy the next three, sorry if it seems mashed together but the review thingy has been giving problems.
flys high in the sky but gets
lonely time to time.
Chaos Bringer, seeks
destruction of Primus and
the universe, too.
Headstrong, he may be
old, but he can pack a hard
punch, an it will hurt.
Hope you liked these! Please update soon! :).
Bumblebee: Cya later! :).
| AzureOcelot chapter 6 . 9/30/2007
I like these! Simple, but very good. If you want a challenge, you could try doing some for the Aerialbots. An obscure group, I know, but they're among my favorites.
| VioletCheckers chapter 5 . 9/28/2007
wheres a jazz haiku? -_-'
| VioletCheckers chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
make a haiku about jazz please
LONG LIVE JAZZ!
(despite what happend in the movie)
| OptimusxElita4ever chapter 5 . 8/1/2007
Thank you, thank you for using my haikus! And I'll make sure to PM you when I think up new ones! ;D
| Elita One chapter 4 . 7/30/2007
hehe i like the Elita One Haiku
and the Optimus Prime from T.L. Arens "Rusti" is the child
| OptimusxElita4ever chapter 4 . 7/30/2007
Here are some that I've made on the spot:
Elita-1 (I know you already have one but please put this one up)
Quite fast and agile,
Lover of Optimus Prime,
Leader of the femmes.
Cares deeply for his cassettes
Friend to Megatron
Friend, Guardian of
Time, we will remember you
in our hearts always
That's all I can think of for now. Please update soon! :)
| Shadow Wisher chapter 3 . 7/15/2007
G1 centric, and haven't updated in a while...
anyway, good haikus, espially Counterpunch and Alpha Trion.
You state your taken requests, well here's one that comes to mind
She happens to be my favroite G1 autobot, and i wish they revive her, Elita-1.
Please continue, and add some D-cons
| raveen92 chapter 2 . 4/28/2007
lol at the "HIT THE DECK"
thats why we love wheeljack (explosions in the background)
| Lil' Monroe chapter 2 . 4/28/2007
Haikus are fun. I heard they're in 3 sentences and 17 syllables long. Good job on the Haikus.