Reviews for Untitled, so far
darkraven93 chapter 6 . 12/26/2007
that was really good! i like it. gotta love poetry, expecially when its about bbrae.
D Hurricane chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
Great Job really good!


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Agent of the Divine One chapter 6 . 11/17/2007
You used "optical" instead of "obstacle I believe. But I like your use of repetition in the stanzas of that resolve to be without pain. :)
Harry Potter Fan 1994 chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
I loved the poem! Hmm...I can't tell what point of view it's from, though. I would have to say it was from Raven's, because BB usually acts happy. Lol, I'm gonna be thinking about this for a while.
The Sacred and Profane chapter 3 . 5/15/2007
Now I'm no poet expert but I liked these poems. Great job and keep up the excellent work.
Agent of the Divine One chapter 5 . 5/3/2007
Fearing and embracing the unknown. Well done. :)
Burnt Out Souls chapter 4 . 4/30/2007
I loved the poems; especially the first one.

I think the first one's in Beast Boy's point of view, right? The words make me think that way:

Why won't you tell me?

Why do you hide?
Agent of the Divine One chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
Excellent. I could feel the rhythm of the poem and the words ring true. Well done. :)