Reviews for Fatigue
lightningpelt chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
This is so sad! TT-TT This sweet child can have a home with me!

Really good poem, you're really talented!
godthisaccountisembarrassing chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
This is so great! I love the rhythmic feeling. Keep writing!
witchesdiner chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
I can't belive this poem! Its amazing! Most people can't cram so much emotion into only a few stanzas. I've read it so many times, but each time you see something else in it. See it straight from the eyes of this leader. Their regrettes. Their suffering and slow desent into starvation. Its unbelivable.
RainingCats chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
I hate myself. Out of all the words in the dictionary, all I can think of when I read this poem is "wow".

It's *so* sad! . . . -sniff- You're a really good poet, not only judging from this one, but from ur other ones. I can even imagine how this poor wasted leader is feeling.
TalksLikeACat chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Aww... that was sad. The kitty is hallucinating! :( Write more poetry! You're very talented!