|Reviews for Pray|
| yseult chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
Loved the flow of this one. Very emotional, very even without being too much. Only thing _I_ would have done differently is the last line. I would have made it shorter for maximum impact. But that's me ;-)
| Pjhoisfhd chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
it's really well-written and emotional. and from what i've read here on fanfic, very original. most angsty fics are completely about trin's death, forgetting the rest of human kind back in zion.
| hansolofan chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
wow...this is nice...really touching...tho you didn't write on how morpheus thought neo would feel, but nvm :)