Reviews for Pray
yseult chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
Loved the flow of this one. Very emotional, very even without being too much. Only thing _I_ would have done differently is the last line. I would have made it shorter for maximum impact. But that's me ;-)
Pjhoisfhd chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
it's really well-written and emotional. and from what i've read here on fanfic, very original. most angsty fics are completely about trin's death, forgetting the rest of human kind back in zion.
hansolofan chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
wow...this is nice...really touching...tho you didn't write on how morpheus thought neo would feel, but nvm :)