Reviews for Hearts Aflame |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cool! I never thought of it from Howl's pov this is really creative! Plus, this gives me a whole other way to look at the movie. It's really good! Arigato! Saki |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have fallen in love with this story! absolutely in LOVE! haha You are a very good author I cna't eveb out iut into words! your use of words...the dialect...I think you truley did capture Howls essence! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was superb. You did a wonderful job. you made go so well with the actual story that one would think the screenwriter had writtrn it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow man, just... wow. This is the best HMC story eva! It's great, everyone's in character, Howl's totally awesome, man, you've got some pretty good writing skills in you little noggin. It was a great pleasure to read your story. I am now going to your authors page to look for more goodies. See ya, DI |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finally worked my way around to this story, and I'm glad I did! This was great! You kept very close to the movie, but enough of it was your own, and the two melded wonderfully! That one chapter was very close to your other story though. The whole time I read it, I felt like it was familiar, and I couldn't figure out why until I read your author's note. But it's not a bad thing. There are only so many things you can change in a scene if you want the same essential story told. And when you had the temporal paradox, I just kept thinking of Jack walking up to Sam and Hammond with his resignation and then bending Sam back with a kiss, lol! All in all, it's a great story! I would love to read more from you in this fandom. And feel special. I never read from this fandom. Your stories are the first and only ones I've read about Howl and Sophie. I loved it, and you're a great writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. amazing! i enjoyed every minute i was reading this story! i liked the last chapter! you did a great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. i love this story. howl's moving castle combined my favourite author with my favourite director and now having such a skilled writed delve into the thoughts that they left out is brilliant. thanks heaps for writing this! _ -cat |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome work! too good to be true. i even read the book where the movie came from. the Howl in the book was even more sarcastic and egoistical than in the movie but i love him still. Markl in the book is a teenager by the way and he is engaged to Sophie's younger sister! ha! cheers to a good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sniffle* I'm not blaming it on allergies this time. I'll be honest enough to say that this one really touched my heart. Extremely well done, sweetie! I loved the whole story, but this chapter especially. It was just fantastic, and I can play the last few scenes of the movie in my head, picturing the scene between them. Bravo! See ya next story, sweetie, and happy writing! Relena |
![]() ![]() ![]() Though you were probably long done with the story before I got here, I'm glad that others like me helped out! It's always a kick to know we can help an author achieve something special just by offering feedback and asking questions. I'm off to the next chapter now, and then I'll probably watch the movie with a little more insight than I had originally. Thanks for that. See ya next chapter, and happy writing! Relena |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, no headache! Lovely! Still, very well written and explained. I appreciate it! Things from the movie are starting to make more sense now. Thanks again! See ya next chapter, sweetie, and happy writing! Relena |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was sweet! *sniffle* It's just an allergy attack, I swear! *mutters* It probably doesn't help that I'm listening to "Good Bye, Ruby Tuesday" right now, either. It seems to fit this scene perfectly. Anyway, I know just what you mean about getting distracted by other stuff when all you want to do is write. Happens to me all the time. Just check out my update record. It's pitiful, at least to me. Happy writing, sweetie, and see ya next chapter! Relena |
![]() ![]() ![]() Paradoxes? Ooh, I can feel a headache coming on. Not that I mind in this case, as it will be a pleasant one . . . if there is such a thing. I like how you wrote this one. It really makes Howl seem more human that he usually does, and that's never a bad thing. Good luck with the paradox thing, and I can't wait to read it. Relena |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I can play the movie in my mind, and add all the thoughts as I go! I love it! Forgot to review the last chapter, but I'd only repeat myself. See ya next chapter, sweetie, and happy writing! Relena |