|Reviews for Exploring Your Textuality|
| jupimako chapter 1 . 5/18
| bridmatt chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Loved it! The atmosphere was really nice. I could totally picture the bus Sasuke was on and the kind of passengers that were on it with him.
I really liked the characterization as well. This is just how I imagine they would be if they were real teenagers and not ninjas with doom and gloom tragedy. Sasuke staying up all night to read books in the park somehow seems exactly like something he'd do. And Naruto giving Sasuke a hug the first time they met in person also seems exactly like something he'd do. This could be the start of a beautiful friendship, or perhaps something more. :)
BTW, I don't blame Sasuke for being cautious! He lives alone and internet predators wouldn't be able to get victims if they weren't good at fooling people...
Also BTW, I have yet to read a "dobe" or a "teme," etc. in any of your stories. For that you deserve all the internet cookies in the world. Those insults are obnoxious, over-used, and incorrect fangirl Japanese besides. :P
Anyway! Great fic! :D
| ColdBlueGirl chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Awesome story! I had fun reading Sasuke's imaginative thoughts. Keep up with the great work!
| Addiction chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Cute. I like it.
| corriandar chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
But you know what's just as awesome? I'm from Adelaide too.. And as if someone here actually writes good sasunaru (: This was a great read!
| Areah51 chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I liked it! It was short but nicely written, and I enjoyed the story! thanks!
| LonelyDreamer7 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Aww it's a good thing sasukes careful with the internet. Because u never know web some pedophile troll is lurking in the night!
This was cute ms short and all good!
| Brie92 chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
heehee i figured that naruto would show up but i hadn't thought he would be on the bus already. i thought he would just randomly get on and sit near sasuke. but the way things happened was way cuter
| She.Drowned.In.Venom chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
-By the way, in the states we have the welfare programs. Depending on your needs and who you are, there are different programs available. One is specifically for women with small children and low incomes and it pays for things like dairy and meats (milk production and protein.)
| effervescentPosterior chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Awesome story :)
| astoria-paranoia chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Aww I really liked this! So adorable of Naruto to pull in Sasuke for a hug in the end If only Sasuke really was characterised like this in the anime
And lol it didn't even click that the word 'dole' isn't used outside of Australia until I read your note at the end. Huzzah for other Australian fans! :P
| Liloi chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
That was surprisingly cute xD
I was grinning since when I noticed that there was a blond on the bus with him.
| Lulla chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
I fell in love
| AmaranthineSolis chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Luv! Short, simple and oh so charming. 3
| Teddyloverr chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
this as really good. you could extend it if you ever had time. it'd be a really nice story