Reviews for Phantasy Star II: Stories
bijk chapter 6 . 8/21/2008
pretty cool, well done, keep it up
Headman Dine chapter 6 . 3/30/2008
Oh hey. I was wondering if this would ever get more stories. Awesome stuff :)
Headman Dine chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
Heh, liking these! They've been pretty unique and insightful so far.
Aktar chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Sega did remake Phantasy Star 2, though it's getting increasely unlikely that it will be released outside of Japan.

You've done an excellent job of capturing the characters' different personalities. Keep writing these, there aren't enough Phantasy Star 2 fics out there.
tisroero chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
I love this game and always wondered what it would be like if they remade it and put movie sequences like this in it.

Good job, the whole Kain, Hugh Uvestia (sp) thing was pretty good.

That guy is a sexist prick in my opinion.
The Plucky Little Ninja chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
This is a nice little snapshot story from one of the game's many downer moments. Nice job with the Rolf/Nei dynamic.

The description of Nei looking out the window in the second paragraph is a little muddled. Might want to clean it up a touch, also the "living with me for only several months" is a little confusing as far as making it seem a short time "only," or a long time "several."

Those are the only quibbles I can come up with. I like the ending. Good sense of flow from the morose to a little hope. You should pump out a few more of these with some of the other moments in the game. I'd enjoy reading them.