Reviews for The Hunt
Ishida no Revolution chapter 15 . 3/6/2013
Aww man. I love this so much. It's written beautifully and everyone, for the most part, seems in character. I look forward to updates.
Phantom-Lord Noel chapter 15 . 9/26/2011
That was beautiful please update some more!
hizmit12-waterlilly3721 chapter 15 . 12/15/2010
I love your story. I truly love it. This story touches my heart in ways I can't understand. I read this story earlier, in 2008. But I didn't read past chapter 13. This story has sat in the back of my mind for the past 2 years. I always wondered what had happened that I had missed. So ,without remembering the title, or summary, I spent (around) three hours searching for this story. If you don't finish this story, then that is fine. But if you decide to write again, then I will Read & Review whatever it is you may write. Thank you for writing this story, it has truly touched my heart.
Tuscon chapter 15 . 10/11/2009
Oh My GoD! You are an amazing story teller!

I think in all honesty even though none of us own the characters you own your story. It is so original and so profound it is entirely your creation.

I loved how you used the balthier vaan rejection moment as a catalyst. BUt most of all i loved how you gave hints and forboded what was to come with the vest in the picture, the esper and other things. You made it more of a story than any fanfic and you should be very proud. You have amazing talent and i hope you continue to polish it!

Bon fait!
KInA chapter 15 . 7/6/2009
my email is incase you wish to reply back

I found this story and i really enjoyed reading it, i am a little sad that you never finished it, but none the less, keep up the good work, i will go and read some more of your work, though i wish you could continue this story if you do i am anxious to see how it ends
Skreech chapter 15 . 6/20/2009
Nononononononononono! I want more! just when Balthier is making progress with Vaan! AHH!
KInA chapter 15 . 6/1/2009
i love this story i read it a longtime ago when it was only the first chapter, and i lost it, then when i found it today i was really excited because i loved this story so much, and well i hope you continue it because its a really good story

and for criticism, nothing bad, i just think the last few chapters felt rushed a bit, but thats just me, even still GREAT story :D keep up the good work
CinnyMon chapter 15 . 12/14/2008
Oh my smack!

This is like the best, most dramatical, most awesome-ist BalthierVaan I have ever read. YOU MUST UPDATE FOR THE SAKE OF MY SANITY! PLEASE!

Also, would you mind if I did some fanart of Mist Vaan and Balthier together?

keep on writin'!
mimeus chapter 15 . 9/25/2008
can't wait 4 more!
Firehedgehog chapter 15 . 9/22/2008
swet sweet update
Aimi-chan chapter 15 . 9/18/2008
Very interesting... I wish Balthier would say "Home is where Vaan is" or something equally cheesy as that, even if I can't imagine him being too cheesy. However, I did like the way his eyes flickered to Vaan as he said those words. Maybe I'm hitting somewhere around the vicinity?

Anyways, awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what you do next! Poor Vaan though, being transformed and all.
i love all yaoi chapter 14 . 8/13/2008
so when are you doing to update it? I really love the stroy it is so god and funny sad and lovable.
Vulpine Ninja chapter 12 . 4/22/2008
i like the way you put in flashbacks and memories of the hunts.

but at the beginning it seem like you haven't seen the ending at all, although you knew Vayne is the final boss.

another thing is about the sudden change in location. Take note that readers who play FFXII or not will have a hard time to recall where the locations are and how they are connected. And why did Balthier rent a chocobo all the way to Garif village when he can do so in Rabanastre?
SoulSayArcher chapter 14 . 4/8/2008

I haven't ever read an FFXII story before, I only bought it the other day. I love this story!

You take your time updating, I just can't wait for the next chapter!

-Wakka xx
Rikku1993 chapter 14 . 2/1/2008
This was the first ff12 fic I read and I'm glad to see it still up and runnin'. Take as long as you need to get the 15th chapter up. Good job with it.
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