Reviews for Numb
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
This is great! I really like the way Esme relates Bella's feelings to her own when her son died. I just wish it was longer. :)
Katie1995 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Beautiful.

- Katie :)
hiatus.prettymuch chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
beautiful. good job :)
MoonSpinner44 chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
A lovely, bittersweet one-shot that I really like. You did a good job of explaining how Esme could relate to Bella and her pain and I liked the one line that said

they had the same deadened look, the same shadows, the same grief etched into their faces.

it just showed how alike Bella and Edward are, and how his leaving did absolutely nothing. Good job and I'm deeply sorry for your losses as well, I too know what it feels like to lose someone you love. But as another reviewer said it seemed like it helped with this piece. I hope you keep writing too!
Fishy Rainboots chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Great job, extremely well written. Your feelings are portrayed excellently.
Bella Sangue chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
I love this. You did a great job of showing Esme's character and relating it to her past. I'm sorry about your family. It probably wouldn't be as good though if you hadn't used your own experiences.