Reviews for Run, Don't Walk
BlackIceWitch chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Love the use of language, awesome mind-bite.
StarLightStarBright567 chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Wow. That's amazing. It really is. I love it. Amazing job.
pwrhungryjr chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
short and sweet!
magicsunbeam chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Wow. Really liked that. It could have bene either boy, Sammy with his frowning, but Dean with his laughing at tantrum taking kids. Nice job.
Nilah chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Loved this. Great job!
Deansgirl95 chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
What an absolutly exelent poem. You captured Dean's aura perfectly in the whole laughing at kids tantrums, and his weariness that he never talks about and that maby he's running out of time for himself. You did a great job. I can wait to see mor from you.
Cherrystone chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Good impact for such a short length. I was picturing Dean, from the bullshit/talking crap part, and laughing at kids having temper tantrums. That's a good detail.