Reviews for Four Seasons
axel100 chapter 3 . 3/7
While this is well written I do take issue with one thing you wrote. Mai did indeed have a childhood crush on Zuko but there's no indication that he saw her as anything more than his little sisters friend when they were younger. He was banished when he was 13 and if Mai was the same age as Azula, she would have been only 11 at the time. For the pas 3 years, his thoughts have been about the Avatar and regaining his honor. So I don't think he actually starting thinking about Mai until after "The Crossroads of Destiny". His awkwardness during his date with Jin was just his inexperience and general nervousness about being on a date with a pretty girl.
jinkofangurl93 chapter 3 . 6/8/2011
Impossible Love a Jinko fan chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
They are nice little drabbles, and remind me dearly of my time in fanfiction, sre now i kinna hate the series but still you did something endearing with these characters
Mr. Average chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
Very nice. I'm glad to see Zuko making up for his past screw-ups. 3 down/1 to go. Granted it won't be easy, but it shold be fun to watch. Keep up the good work. Peace
Elisa chapter 2 . 11/20/2007
Aw! I love Soko and I loved this drabble. Though Song seemed a tad OOC for me, it was still great.
zukofangirl chapter 2 . 11/18/2007
aw, so sweet again. i loved it, especially when it began snowing and the ending was perfect, even though it was an open ending.

update soon!
defunct111 chapter 2 . 11/17/2007
Mr. Average chapter 2 . 11/17/2007
Very nice. It's not always easy to make up for past mistakes and it's niceto see Zuko making an effort. Keep up the good writing. Peace
cm27815 chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
So far, very good. I can't wait for the Zujin chapter. One thing: as a bonus chapter, possibly a Zuko/Yue attempt?
koolkame chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
After this I really want to see the rest. Hi-yah, back to work!
GoddessOfCsilla chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
"Now he needed to find another vase to cool himself down."


Great job!
clearsunrise chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
lol aww that was so cute. i do like chibi maiko_
Cath chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Hey girl

Yeah that was a long time. I love your story!

Brilliant idea Zuko apologizing and a great ending.

I read your story of Paire soon ;)

sakunade chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Hee. This was adorable. I love how Zuko was trying his best to help her out but all he kept doing was messing it up. Great start! Looking forward to more.
Ignite chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
that was great!

I loved how you described certain moments in time, thoughts and feelings!

very nicely written!
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