Reviews for Why?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
its odd i agree just dont write a review longer than the story Straia
XxXIamaroleplayingfangirlXxX chapter 7 . 6/2/2011
Aw! Poor poor Hammy! :( :(
XxXIamaroleplayingfangirlXxX chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Aw!...poor poor Hammy! :(
bob chapter 5 . 3/27/2011
running towards the tree hammy always hung around?

hehe. guess he's hanging around a bit more now.
Princess Shania chapter 6 . 12/14/2010
This is so DEPRESSING!

Whaere's the COMEDY!
Weston chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Hammy was a lovable character in the movie, but to make him gay is so out of character it's ridiculous.

RJ x Heather I can understand, even applaud at times;

but RJ x Hammy? No... way... in... hell!

Ace chapter 7 . 1/18/2010
Dude man for once in my life I can't find the words to express how I feel

Great job and poor hammy
Nocturnalwhitewolf chapter 7 . 7/31/2009
This was so sad. Very, very well done. I think you should know that this was actually the first story I read on Fanfiction and this is what realed me in. You should be very proud of this, it's an amazing piece.
schindler chapter 2 . 3/2/2009
It makes sense that Hammy gets even more sad when RJ says theyre nothing but good friends. It really hurts when you tell somebody you love them, and you dont hear it back.

Thats practically the same thing Hammy is getting. If RJ knows Hammy has romantic feelings for him, but only want them to be friends, it would really hurt him to hear that. It would only make things worse.
JT chapter 7 . 9/6/2008
I've read this, like, a hundred times or more, and every time I do it brings tears to my eyes. poor hammy, no one could have helped him either. Ya know, if ya play "my imortal" from evanescience while reading the epilogue, you'll friggin' soak yourself in tears.

Jt chapter 7 . 9/4/2008
Dude, I totally cried the first time I read this. Not a damn thing you did wrong. love the story, hope you keep writing on this sight. choa!
Animation Universe 2005 chapter 6 . 7/18/2008
This is so sad. I love it so much!
Straiya chapter 7 . 6/26/2008
I see the formula but where's the story around which this bare outline should be wrapped; each chapter feels more like a plot summary than anything else?

I'm not sure if you were trying to be poetic or if you're just a lazy writer but this on no account qualifies as anything more than a synopsis for a non-existent short story that barely resembles the lowest grade products of my own second grade story time sessions.

Now I like your style, you have a good imagination; all you need is the necessary arsenal of words through which you can express it. Just buy a thesaurus, read a writer's guide (or two), develop your vocabulary and please try again.

So much potential, Gipdac, this could have been so much more.
Brian chapter 5 . 11/24/2007
Great writting but I think you need to find a better name for the book. Like the hanging knot or something.
Kristen chapter 6 . 11/24/2007
That was absolutely moving. But there is just one thing I would've done differently.I know his age wasn't stated or anything, but, I really don't think Hammy's 21. Just a thought, but I think everyone who saw the movie thought he was between the ages of 7 and maybe 15. Other than that, It was beautiful.
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