|Reviews for Waterlogged|
| BlatantBookworm chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
| Allronix chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Surprisingly, this one is really close to "original flavor." For lack of a better term, it "feels" very close to one of the 22-minute episodes back in the day. The dialogue, especially Shane's is dead-on. I can practically hear Pries's laconic delivery.
My main crit? Slow down a bit. It feels like I'm reading a script. The dialogue is there, but the descriptions, the details, the immersion isn't quite there. There's no animation studio, so we have to be able to paint the pictures in our head.
| mcatB chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Great story! Nice to see some more GR fics here!
| mik mik chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Aww...Goose found a mom? How cute! :)