|Reviews for Eternal Youth|
| Miratirx chapter 14 . 3/28
This was great!
| sad poop chapter 13 . 2/3
how could you break my heart like this?
| im still poop chapter 9 . 2/3
holy shit the suspense i got from this holy shit
| poop sauce chapter 7 . 2/3
oh my god the monks are such gossips this is hilarious
| poop-chan chapter 4 . 2/3
""They are mine!" Jack screamed."
GOD CAN YOU MAKE THIS ANY BETTER?
THIS IS IT
THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING EVER OMG
sdfhjgkh YOU MADE MY DAY aaa
| WeirdPrompts chapter 14 . 11/13/2017
I enjoyed this. I've read it before, years ago and still it's a favorite. Little Chase is so cute and sweet and Daddy Jack is perfection! The end makes me a little sad though. Poor Jack.
| LadyRainDancer chapter 14 . 8/5/2017
Aww poor sad Jackie :o I thoroughly enjoyed this story and now, on to the sequel!
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/10/2017
This fic was literally the best think to happen to me in the last few months. And I thank the Lord that you made it ;D. I think you did pretty good with the bits of German here and there. But as a German there is only one part where I'd correct you, which is in chapter 14 "Zu wem kann es betreffen" , you wanted the German translation to "Whom it may concern" your German translation is fine but no one would actually say it like that the right way would be "Wenn es auch betreffen mag"
| Dude.cx chapter 14 . 11/21/2016
Cx worst... I need to rip now omg too much I can't I can't this was so fucking funny yet traumatizing. Yes traumatizing yet funny. I will never look at Chase the same way again! Hahaha I was already insane but I think this topped everything . Omgosh
| Dude.cx chapter 13 . 11/21/2016
Omg xD this story is so messed up idky I find it fucking hilarious, I'm going to hell
| Dude.cx chapter 11 . 11/21/2016
Omgosh xD yup it would seem like Chase is a pedo but hahaha na dude just seems gay not a pedo bear
| Dude.cx chapter 10 . 11/21/2016
I was about to ditch the story when wuya ki-gags * oh fic no ,..Omg no . (*д) but I skimmed second chances right and oh thank god she just wants to kill him. Whew!
| Dude.cx chapter 8 . 11/21/2016
Awwwwwwwwwwwwe-I'm freaked out
| Dude.cx chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
Omg that's beautiful remembering a book and never forgotten. : ) I have terrible memory but I do have my very first book since a child never through it out. XD it still makes me cry, it's about a normal curious bear for books meeting las in the woods, winter came and well she couldn't be there in her cabin, she left a bunch of books for him. (*д) aaaa shit nope nope *fans eyes* the background music isn't helping
| Dude.cx chapter 2 . 11/20/2016
Calling child services on Spicer xD omg his nan is terrible yet realistic .. ppl back then were...crae (﹏)