Reviews for Eternal Youth
Guest chapter 14 . 5/10
This fic was literally the best think to happen to me in the last few months. And I thank the Lord that you made it ;D. I think you did pretty good with the bits of German here and there. But as a German there is only one part where I'd correct you, which is in chapter 14 "Zu wem kann es betreffen" , you wanted the German translation to "Whom it may concern" your German translation is fine but no one would actually say it like that the right way would be "Wenn es auch betreffen mag"
Dude.cx chapter 14 . 11/21/2016
Cx worst... I need to rip now omg too much I can't I can't this was so fucking funny yet traumatizing. Yes traumatizing yet funny. I will never look at Chase the same way again! Hahaha I was already insane but I think this topped everything . Omgosh
Dude.cx chapter 13 . 11/21/2016
Omg xD this story is so messed up idky I find it fucking hilarious, I'm going to hell
Dude.cx chapter 11 . 11/21/2016
Omgosh xD yup it would seem like Chase is a pedo but hahaha na dude just seems gay not a pedo bear
Dude.cx chapter 10 . 11/21/2016
I was about to ditch the story when wuya ki-gags * oh fic no ,..Omg no . (*д) but I skimmed second chances right and oh thank god she just wants to kill him. Whew!
Dude.cx chapter 8 . 11/21/2016
Awwwwwwwwwwwwe-I'm freaked out
Dude.cx chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
Omg that's beautiful remembering a book and never forgotten. : ) I have terrible memory but I do have my very first book since a child never through it out. XD it still makes me cry, it's about a normal curious bear for books meeting las in the woods, winter came and well she couldn't be there in her cabin, she left a bunch of books for him. (*д) aaaa shit nope nope *fans eyes* the background music isn't helping
Dude.cx chapter 2 . 11/20/2016
Calling child services on Spicer xD omg his nan is terrible yet realistic .. ppl back then were...crae (﹏)
Randomstrike chapter 14 . 11/8/2014
Best fic ever
irezel chapter 14 . 6/29/2014
wowowowo, this fic was amazing. I...absolutely loved it. I'm glad Jack could be a little happy, although i hope Chase gets over being a jerk. hahaha. :D
beaniejeanie chapter 6 . 1/9/2014
I WAS GONNA REVIEW THIS AS A CALM, COLLECTED PERSON BUT FUCK IT, YOU'RE GIVING ME TOO MANY FEELS TO BE CALM! THIS. IS. THE. BEST. EVER. JACK IS SO IN CHARACTER! ONE MINUTE HE'S BAMF AND THE NEXT HE'S FAINTING. AND THE WHOLE RUMOR THAT GETS SPREAD AROUND? PERFECTION. I LOVE YOU. DON'T GET ME ON WUYA'S NEW FOUND GRUDGING RESPECT FOR JACK. THE MILK AND BLOOD SHIT KILLED ME. FANTASTIC WORK. ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC. I'M GOING TO GO FLY INTO THE SUN NOW.
Shadow-the-Knight chapter 14 . 9/14/2013
I'm going to miss paternal Jack but it was worth reading this, I hope this isn't the end
ebonypol chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Amazing! Loved it
STrwBRYGASHESxxx chapter 14 . 6/9/2013
I cried a bit... Poor Jack. Even though this is fanfiction, I just got this new found respect for Jack now... thanks :)
I love Tools chapter 14 . 2/2/2013
HEADING TO GERMANY... err... I mean... AUSTRIA! May I point out that Chase is a certified ASSHOLE and deserves to get his hair not only shaved but shoved up his posterior?
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