Reviews for CAGED
Joel Courtney chapter 8 . 6/1/2014
Come on have NAruto come back and save her from that jerk other than that your doing really well with this series keep up the good work
Joel Courtney chapter 6 . 6/1/2014
He's a punk who only judges women by looks that goes straight to the prince he doesn't deserve a wife or children and this is coming from a person of the same gender as him
mellow out chapter 2 . 12/9/2010
Sarcastic Proserpine chapter 12 . 1/31/2010
*bursts out in tears*

Uupdaate, please! D: My poor fangirl-heart will soon cease to beat if this isn't continued. *dramatic handgesture towards stupefied audience*

j/k. But I really, really hope that one day, you'll continue this lovely piece of writing. It's been so long, and I know I'm a hypocrite since I, too, have not updated some of my stories for a long time, but, yeah... You would make me very happy if you decided to make a next chapter. xD
Shadow Wolf Spirit chapter 12 . 8/12/2009
I hate it when people leave ya hangin and dont update in a long time so i say UPDATE... please?
Mauia88 chapter 12 . 2/25/2009
O my gosh, I love your story! Very well done and the way its moving along is well done. I like the way you right it out. You must update more often! Your story is moving quite well! But i still wonder what the outcome might be, pairing wise. 0,o

Keep up the great work!
bluepika chapter 1 . 12/21/2008

I love this story so much!It's different from others because of the Aladdin-setting ,I'd love to read more!

And yeah,I prefer naruhina so much better in this story because naruto saved her in the first place only to lose her later...(_
lovingo0Kawaii0oGirl chapter 12 . 11/20/2008
please continue!
Haruka2007 chapter 12 . 9/21/2008
poor hinata :(

is gaara gona hit on her? hehehe :D

i wonder whats happening with sasuke and hyuugas!

update soon!
Arthur Reinhart chapter 12 . 9/20/2008
I was waiting to give a review of your story at the end, but it's not finished T.T

the bad criticizim (or how ever you spell it):

It needs a lot of work. It seems like a lot of the story is rushed in the middle chapters.

Now the praise:

I love your story! The character use was excellent, the story itself is great, and, well, no words can really say anything else. I can't wait to read your next chapters.
Cedarx chapter 12 . 9/20/2008
Awesome! I was beginning to think that you've abandoned the story.

Anyway, you have a really intricate plot. The story itself is great, all you need to do is polish it a bit so it goes from a good story to an excellent story.

Oh, and longer chapter. We need those too )

Xx Falcon's Eye xX chapter 11 . 9/4/2008

NaruHina/SasuHina/GaaHina? whoa!

champylin chapter 11 . 9/1/2008
WAH! UNFAIR! I want to read MORE!So... it'll be GaaHina next? Come on... PLEASE update... so... she really is THE Hinata Hyuuga... ryt? LOLz... I hope Gaa will fall in love with her... PLEASE? but before that... it's been awhile since you updated, according to the date indicated... so you better update this story... it's one of the most trivial and interesting I've ever read, slash out the modern aladdin story... there's more to this... and this is actually the most original I've ever read! So come on... update this story... PRETTY PLEAS?_
champylin chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
oH! This is like Aladdin in the modern context... LOL... Okay... on to the next chappie!
DarkSapphireXx chapter 11 . 4/3/2008
nice story :)

altho i love sasuhina, this story seems more likely to be a naruhina since sasuke's too hooked up on his 1st love , hina doesnt want to marry him and clearly feels strongly for naruto, even if it isn't love..
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