This is awesome! I know exactly what you mean by the Scripture references. I love how you included those biblical titles for Jesus. (Or Aslan.)You are a very talented writer.

Thank you

This is absolutely beautiful. I cried because all of that is true. Jesus does see all of us, inside and out. He sees us laugh, cry, smile and pout. He sees everything and he loves us just the same. Thank you.

I give thanks everyday to the Lion of Judah, the great I Am.

~VFK~

wow..

This is just beautiful. Thank you for writing this, for writing Aslan as C.S. Lewis meant for Him to be read: as Jesus. Lovely.

Perfect

Thank you

Thanks for the great read. I was crying as I was reading this. It really hit home. Great Story.

Fighting for His glory,

HisWarrior

Thanks Aslan. *hugs him*

Too beautiful, if such a thing is possible. Excellent style. I cried.

So true, so true.

AWESOME! LOVE IT! :)

In Aslan's Name,

Queen Susan the Gentle

i thought this story was absoloutly beautiful! Rich, piongent, and filled with incredible comfort! I loved the biblacal references! Jesus is the lion!

Thank you so much for writing this.

"This world is not my home, I'm just a passing through/ My treasures are laid up, somewhere beyond the blue/The angels beckon me, from heaven's open door/And I can't feel at home, in this world anymore"

That hymn jumped to mind as I was reading this, and I love it, so I love this story too! You did an excellent job here. Isn't it nice to know that this world isn't our home? I, for one, am looking forward most emphatically to the day I can leave. Great job!

~Shiloh